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Primordial Smith

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นักเขียน: Tunahan

4.52 (30 เรตติ้ง)

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A young smithing fanatic died while crafting an old sword because of an accident. But he didn't go to Hell or Heaven. When he opened his eyes again, he became 8 years old in a primordial tribe.
There is cultivation, Qi, monsters, stone carving, and smithing, and most importantly; there are nude girls everywhere!!!
1 chapter/day + mass release whenever I saved enough chapters.





*My main language not English and I am using grammary to find my mistakes, when you see a mistake, if you can leave a comment it will be great.
*I found the cover photo on net, owner of the photo can reach to me if wants me to not use, if permitted thanks for it
*I don't like to stop on cliffhangers so there maybe a day or two without chapters and 4-5 maybe more chapters will be available in the same time
*I got the inspiration of this novel from a novel that I forgot it's name (mc got transported to primordial world and became a burning horn tribesmen or something like that)
*Tags: Cultivation, Harem, Polygamy, Transmigration, Another wolrd, System, Monsters, R-18... maybe more (I can'be forgot to write here or didn't remember at all)

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30รีวิว

4.52

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Tunahan
LV 10 Badge

There is not much to say to my own book so thanks for reading my book and this senseless comment. İf you found a mistake or want to give your advice, that would be great for me. This is my first writing a book/novel so every help counted

5yr
ดู 15 การตอบกลับ
Yanorth
LV 14 Badge

This novel is just fantastic, I'm can see a few grammar errors but isn't that bad, loving the idea of the novel, I'm love any novel with craft system

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Drifting_Clouds

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
TheCeddel

I also really enjoy the Setup and hope, that you can keep up the good work. It has a really unique worldbuilding and a good amount of Slice of Live which I enjoy. The Action has also a nice timing, so that you don't get bored and just thinking about what he will build next is keeping me tense.

5yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
MrSnow
LV 11 Badge

So far im really enjoying this, keep up the good work, love both the story and premise just maybe clean up the "status" and especially "quest" screens a bit

5yr
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
BigNovelBigDream

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
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4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Lukas_West

Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update!Update! Update Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update!

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
zd4zaaa

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4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
dudeoftitties

Update or give the book to someone cause I really like it and want it to continue until its complete. Please don't let it die. I'll give you my free passes?

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Jepsx
LV 3 Badge

Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Elina_K

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4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
demioch

I'll be honest I'm rating it 5 because I'm hoping you will continue this book and keep it going although its been awhile since an update I sincerely hope you can keep this story going or because not only is it good ( a lot of people like r18 scenes as well just saying) but it also has an interesting way of developing I'll be waiting for updates I hope you have a good day by the way and happy thanksgiving

4yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Piotr_Uklejewski

******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Cragens
LV 12 Badge

good novel, it reads very well, the story is consistent and interesting waiting for the next parts. Bardzo dobrze się czyta. ,......,.........,......,..,.................................,......

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5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
THEIMMORTALDhantos

badbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadBADBADBADBADBAD. NOt update how cruel life is

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Drifting_Clouds

Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update !

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
BookDeity

this novel gives me Far Cry Primal vibes 😂 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Quinlan_Lightfoot

I’m hoping there’s an update soon as it is a fun book. The world is interesting and there is a lot left to discover, the story is a bit fast paced but the Author has said he will work on it.

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ryeshl
LV 14

My type of novel with decent character and world building. Hope to have more consistent updates 👍 You can push the smithing levelling a bit more as I love skill developement and the MC's levelling process. Keep up the good work!

5yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ

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