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There are a lot of people out there that when asked if they could choose a world to live in, a fantasy world that they could start all over in there is no doubt that the world of Pokémon would be one of the top of the list, and why not its full of breathtaking landscapes, its safe enough for 10 years old's to wander the woods and of course it has Pokémon... but what if the world of Pokémon isn't as bright and gentle as we think it is. Meet Robert Leone and how he chose to reincarnate into the world of Pokémon and discovered it's not a PG-rated world.
my first novel so any feedback is appreciated.
I don't own the rights to Pokémon or any characters other than the ones I make
cover art is not mine so if you don't want it there let me know
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The story is written pretty well for fanfiction as of chapter 18. The story has slow and steady world-building. The world and characters are fleshed out and the story uses some sprinkles of humor, but I was expecting a realistic Pokemon world with a survival of the fittest type of world(humans would then be not as privileged as in canon) and got a realistic world were humans act more realistic and our Mc is a Person with a very fragile psyche. The story tends more towards drama and angst than comedy and really isn't my cup of tea.
I am a pokemon fan since I remember.....This story I started reading it first but found that it is not for me......its slow paced and realism...a pokemon fic realism doesn't matter that much...and too much family thing....I hate that stuff......will look back If it gets better....you should read pokemon mystic world and journey towards greatness
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way too long winded for my taste and I have a feeling nothing much will happen and it will get even slower when he sets off on his journey. just not for me.
Quiero saber que pasa a continuación 😢😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😢😢😃😢😃😢😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😀😃😀😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😀😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😃😢😢😃😢😃😢😃😢
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I really liked this story despite it's small flaws (Grammar mistakes, the MC getting awesome bonuses from the start - nothing too bad though). Sadly it appears to have been dropped by the author.
Tengo realmente muchas esperanzas en esto, hace un buen tiempo que no encuentro algo bueno de Pokémon. De todos modos, si alguien lee esto, dale una oportunidad, al menos hasta después del capitulo 17.
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review as of chapter 42. let's start off with the story- it's fairly well structured with good basis in a believable setting. Since it's pokemon there isn't really much canon to follow (cause there is literally so much that he can pick and choose what he wants where) and the author takes advantage of that very well. The story doesn't fall into the cliche of the born to oak or delia or some other imperative known character, the author takes time to flesh out an actual family and it's quite well done. I would have preferred for a little more characterization but that's just cause of me what the author offers is sufficient for the more imaginative reader. The main character has a likeable personality and maintains consistency which is all I look for. the chapter length is slightly wanting here but considering the fact that it is a story and works as a wonderful novel regardless I am much less pressed by the flaw, so much so that I often overlook it until I get to the end! I can't say much for the update schedule cause I haven't followed the novel long enough. Overall I give the novel a whooping 4.4 and even that as a conservative estimate. The story is good and I hope the quality remains as stellar as the author has routinely delivered.
I love pokemon realism and this on is really good so far it's a bit slow in the beginning but you can tell alot of effort has gone into the the world and character building and that helps to immerse you're self into the story so I'm rally looking forward to how this will turn out
Another great take on Pokémon, greatly recommend for those who enjoy reading about a pokemon drama.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love this! At first I was not so sure since I did not really feel drawn in by the summary or the first chap, but then I saw it in my recommended and thought I would give it a chance and loved it!
The prologue of this fanfiction is good for the moment (as most pokemon fanfiction), it's interesting, the writing quality is good. Let's see if the author can continu the development of his story (most pokemon FF drop after prologue cause author don't have any idea where to go)
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Es pokemon asi que toma tus 5 estrellas 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I love realism in Pokemon. Keep up the good work author :D ..........................................................................................
(Review made at chapter 19. Maybe Ill update it in the future) - Reincarnation into a realistic Pokemon World as a kid. - Baby phase is skipped. Starts at 5 years old. - Story focused on world building, family feels and learning. - Uses Pokémon Color Talent. But it is more intuitive and not the usual Rainbow Colors Talent. - MC's golden finger is to know Pk talents and some weird feeling to know his future Pokemons? I'm not really sure. NOT SYSTEM. - Slow paced. You're going to get a lot of criticism because of this on webnovel. Maybe post this story on other sites like FanFiction, it fits better there. Good luck with your story! I'm not really a fan of starting slowpaced stories, but I'm a sucker for Pokemon stories so... Thanks for writing!