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D2D_Dare2Dream

Warning! This story contents are mature and are not suitable for anyone under age. Please, also as the title clearly already said what will be in it, if you actually read it... You need help. Not me. If you do not like this novel, stop reading it. Don't bash on it when there isn't even enough chapters to show you the entire story. I do appreciate comments and reviews that are reasonable. Not because you can't stand the profanity, that you had to review it.

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XiaRui

I don't get this. Sounds like written by a sexually frustrated person and the scenes were pulled out from some hate **** video. Words are vulgar and the characters seemed like just sprouting nonsense by being a d*ck and horny. Oh man, you wasted my time.

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ineedawaifu

HAHAHAHAHAHA FOR THOSE WHO ARE EXPECTING LITTLE BUNNIES, CUTE LOLLIES, HAREM, AND GOODIE TWOSHOES, THIS IS NOT FOR YOU. Writing Quality: 5 Star Stability of Updates: 5 More Stars Story Development: 5 More More Stars Character Design: 5 More More More Stars World Background: 5 More More More More Stars A total of 25 Stars. GIVE ME MOOOOOORE CHAPTERS.

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ShiinaMH

Hello, Author-san! What is this? Is this bl or not? I'm really interested if this is bl! Well if it's not, I'll think about reading it.^^.... No offense though. I go reading anything as long as I'm in the mood for it. So I'll just put this in my library for now. I NEED IMMEDIATE REPLY. joke hehe ^^

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KilleKatan

It's really Fucked up, but I like it! What I think need's improving: I Expect better development of the story! And although I don't have a perfect English I still would like it to be a little better written, because at some point's it's taken me a while to get it xD! Also if there were more regular updates it would be lovely (?) What I like: So far I think the world background is amazing and the characters are a very dark representation of society and the author's ****ed up mind (?) Also it captures pretty well the two universal deliriums of humans :p **: reading status says C2 it's actually at C5 :c Bugdian

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soulshocker

The novel was great at the beginning but if all you’re going to right is about a sadistic and masochist woman torturing a man it would be no fun and I’d be dropping this novel... thanks

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Inmortal_Dog

To have in this story the only good thing are the erotic rare scenes, some are SDM (sadomasochistic) and in the others, the boy remembers the girl who tortured him, the rest is too unreal, I already explain it in the comments of each chapter I read and since it is too long, I will copy the comments and I will put the number of the chapter, ahh and another good thing is the design of characters, first we have the protagonist where his life ends up being a piece of **** plus mental disorders, the crazy girl (Melanie), he friend of the protagonist which leads to misfortune and a new girl who wants to **** the protagonist knowing only for a day xd. Now the chapters: Capitulo 1 You seriously think that this is scary, haha; and please, seriously you think that the candle will hurt so that one shouts, hahahaha, and the guy is masochistic, at least in the first chapter, this is PURE AND HARD SADOMASOCHI** Chapter 2 Seriously the most intelligent detective is believed under the skies and is guided by a fucking book, just for this, he deserves everything that is happening to him and I keep saying that this guy is a masochist. And I keep saying that this is not horror and suspense, because only seeing the chapter, I know what will happen next, and as a gift, instead of giving me fear, I am amused by what is happening to this guy. Chapter 3 This chapter has seemed funny to me, since the mc is a poor masochistic soul, he knows that they are going to kill him, but even so in his mind he only thinks about ***, how does this guy brain work alone with apples? What else is highlighted in this chapter are mainly the flashbacks between the dialogues, the rest is trash until now. Chapter 4 Oh no poor man, now the only thing that I hope in the next chapters is that they sodomize hahahah, I smell it, so we emit the horror and supplant it eroticism SDM, the suspense throw it out the window and replace it with how unfortunate life of mc is in comparison to our life hahaha. Chapter 5 This chapter has been darker than the previous one, but I emphasize only for men, because if a woman reads this, she just shrugs and says next, this girl is crazy, I guess he found out that the one who killed his dad when he discovered his identity when he arrives in the city , because if he has made a plan to bring it and everything, it would be too farfetched and already very done, that is boring and very intuitive. Chapter 6 The part where he goes crazy, is abrupt, but believable since he was tortured, but when you told me that he had not been fed for two days, the unrealism went through the roof, we had a recount of what happened from the first chapter, the protagonist at the beginning had energy even to scream, also wanted to escape and finally he could joke, I mean, that his fatigue was not so much (mentally and physically), but now in chapter six, we find that a he has been tortured physically and mentally since he was proud and not eaten in two days, this guy should not even be able to talk and less scream, the only thing that can save him, is arguing that when he killed this crazy girl, he had an exaggerated adrenaline rush (god level), so much that he could use his full strength, in addition to moving the waist at the same time hahaha. Ahh Finally this novel is not dark, it is an erotic SDM and the one that says otherwise is a pussy. Chapter 7 Hahaha like an eagle, this is too funny, or please, in a second I recover your mental capacity, I mean, the physical and mental torture with the solo works for 10 minutes and then it becomes immune like in a game. And then it becomes unstable again and hits a cadaver hahah, I think it became a "little" mentally unstable, this is the only thing and I do not understand why they did not do psychological tests, since they always do them in these types of cases, but I remember that this story never made sense and it passed me. **: MC is a closet masochist. Chapter 8 Ohh ****, this guy's love transcends the heavens, seriously, I guess it would happen if this guy gets his horns, he sure commits suicide, having the girl torture him, humiliation, contempt and the guy still said he loved her , although first he said that he hated her, this is confusing, well, it is the mentality of the mc, I still believe that it is better than this in a hospital for the mentally ill. And for the rest, 1 can serve to develop a character or 2 to give more misfortunes, which is the only thing I've read since I started this and I'm not complaining as I find everything that happens funny. Chapter 9 Well I guess the protagonist has the frégoli mental disorder, that's horrible, because he's going to see people where you are not, and also he also hears voices in his head, what a sad life he leads, well, I hope you upload another chapter since the life of this guy is sad that even I laugh and not because it is bad, but because when I saw this novel, I read the reviews, said it was a dark story and was well done, but when I entered, I gave a lot Laughter, everything was too unreal and the guy was too stupid and had power up in rare moments hahaha. And I already knew what was going to happen before you wrote it, it was too intuitive.And seriously you're going to launch a book of this in amazon, ohhh this is too good, do it you have all my support hahaha.

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roganvercueil

Wow I really loved this book.😂 Who els was turned on by this . Because damn . Its a good book so far . When will the next chapter be released I'm curious Who other than me is turned on by blood ?

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mahimakoli

Oooooooooo...mmy god!! This novel is super nice..👯💓💓💓💓....i will definitely recommend this to others........i really enjoyed this novel...

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mahimakoli

I really enjoyed this novel ...the characters were amazing... The story is amazing....👌👌👌👌.... I m really looking forward to the next chapter for this novel.... Best novel ..

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_name_of_user_

It's okay, sometimes I feel like the readers don't really think the author knows what they are writing. On a scale of 1 to 10, with one being very low writing quality, ten being perfect ur somewhere near it, I would say this novel is a 6 or 7... or somewhere around there

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jessa28

this story is have a thrilled and i like the characters also alex beacause alex is so brave i hope that the writer write a next story,and this story is goddamn god and the writing quality of this story is very very god

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CoolGal362

THAT WAS AMAZING! OH MY FUCKING GOD! The gore, the *** and the characters. Everything just came together perfectly. The novel has a real nice flow to it. It's wonderful. OH MY GOD!

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10thBubbleTea

At first, the torture scenes were a bit cringe-y, the story seemed like it was trying very desperately to be sexy and perhaps attract people who like to read BDSM novels or erotica but instead of attracting it felt repulsive. Execution of the story was poor but the idea behind it is A+. Use of English is poor too but I can't blame you for that, not everyone has perfect English. So I'd suggest getting a grammar checker like Grammarly, it'll do wonders for you and improve your use of English a lot. On a final note, I'd say that you should try and improve your execution of the story itself, try having a friend proof-read for you or write multiple drafts until you get one that's well fleshed out. I feel that if you improve and edit your first few chapters a bit more then it'll attract a lot of readers. This book's got potential.

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heavenlfistking

More u release more the people will show interest . Most of us looks for novels which has more chAps to read n enjoy it. If its with less chaps we think let it be for now will read it when it has more chaps. So keep up the good work n release in regularly if possible so more people will show interest in it

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blakeybear

Amazing story with a great amount of detail throughout with a lot of suspense between chapters. Overall amazing novel with a lot of different types of context about the characters and what they do the entire way throughout the story, only negative is that I wish that there was more.

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Khillie

I've read it and....... I recommend this book to the strong of judgement, will, and have a thirst for for blood and has an understanding of ***..... Even though it only has 6 chapter.. And still going.. Hopefully.... It is really good... If you like violence, blood, *** and others then you must pick this novel.... But if you're a sissy, can't stand a single drop of blood, don't understand how killers work...... THEN PLEASE DONT READ.... YOU'LL ONLY tarnish this good violence book..... Thank you.. 😁😁😈😈😁😁