บท 16: Rewrite
I will be making a rewrite of this book.
You might ask, why a rewrite so early into the story?
Well i think that this story warrants a rewrite because of how bad it is.
Constant pov shifts in between sentences, boring fight scenes, and more.
When I try to go back to edit the chapters, i just mess even more things up.
The constant pov shift were a result of me trying to change the pov from first person to third person in the earlier chaps.
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