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Pirate Fire Dragon(One Piece Fan-fic)
3.15 (22 เรตติ้ง)
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"Brother Kata Kuri, sorry, I don't want to bear Charlotte's name long ago!"
"Ace, your flame is too weak!"
The man who ate the fruit of the dragon, the rebel of the Charlotte Family, Join Vlad on his journey to explore the One-piece world!
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AUTHOR KINDLY REMINDER:
My English is literally trash
Read with causation if your brain can't take it it's not my fault
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3.15
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It isnt as bad as some google translations from china but damn its close.. Managed to somehow read half of chapter 1 and no more, its simply unbearable.
I have never left a negative review b4 but this needs to be said Look, as much as I like the concept and would like to continue reading to relieve my boredom this is completely unreadable. If the author gets an editor in the future and makes the story readable then contact me and I shall remove this review.
The english is way too confusing to put together a in depth story. It is basically just concepts you are reading that you can understand but there is a difficulty figuring what the author is trying to convey.
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OOOOHHHHH GOD FUCK it is... i... i ..... cant ... understand **** here. Please get and Additor or some how Voluntary correct your grammer and stuff.
If u want a fucking headache I suggest u don't read this book it's story is pretty interesting but you have to be prepared coz reading this will decrease ur intelligence I hope I stop reading but if u want to continue to read good luck
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Man im so confuse read your story Please do not translate the original name in google translate i dont care about grammar but do something for easy to read and it very must do not translate the name character if you posting in english
There are a lot of grammatical errors, but the story is very good so please improve the quality of the English language, thank you.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Overall the story is good but plz fix the grammar in the novel plz author and I could possibly give you a higher score plz I beg you get the grammar fixed.
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Well english is not good but it's ok but i think there is good potential in story so please improve your English.i am looking forward to what you are doing to do next hope you did not disappoint your fans
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If this had proper English this could have been a great story but this writing styles land barley English words are unbearable I would have loved to read it if someone had decent English.
Literally can't read it, I stopped at chapter one. Some might say it's too early to leave a review, but this rule applies only to novel that you manage to read. The grammar is letarlly zero, probably author used an automatic translator or I don't know, it just unreadable. It might have great ideas and plot behind the horrible grammar but it's like putting a piece of art behind a wall, you can't see it, it's worthless
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