Percy Jackson : The Bright One

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LUBT

story is good so far but its another of story wre the mc gets reincarnated in to the past and needs 100 of chapters to even reach the main plot of the world like i klicked on it to see mc in percy jackson not in aincent greek

LV 12

Mamdouh_mohamed

Mr. Author, will you continue writing your first novel, or will you stop it to focus on the new novel? Please do not stop the first novel. It is one of the best novels I have read in my life.

LV 3

saxmepapi

This was exactly what I was looking for, A fanfiction with a protagonist that is reincarnated into a prominent god from one of the myths. The writing and character building have been quality till now. There are only 4 chapters as of the time of this review, I hope author follows up with consistent updates with the same quality 👍

LV 14

DasSchwotz

It is great. Sadly, most Olympian Fanfictions get dropped and Thatcher mostly even after 10 or 20 chapters.I hope test won't be the case here.

LV 4

Godofmischief243

I loved how you described APOLLO. I also loved how you described divinity and how it suits the characters inside the story.

LV 2

dammno

the story becomes boring after the 15 chapters... 😇

LV 10

Gunts92

great story, but it takes its time, too much to make us experience the mythology, like the other PJ story which is successful you get lost in the story of the character, but Percy Jackson is a story of our time, so as much as I love what is written, I don't feel the connection with Percy Jackson or another mythological story. I gave 4 stars everywhere except for Story Development because it is on the verge of an original story

LV 4

No_No_4004

This story is developing wonderfully so far and I have only good things to say about it but I just hope that you would update more often.

LV 10

F_A_T_E

is this story dropped n m

LV 4

Alex_167

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LV 3

Makomo_XoX

I absolutely love this. the vocabulary was extraordinary and it had depth that not alot of other stories have. obviously it's set a while before the present events of Percy Jackson but it's still amazing. I really hope the author continues this story cause it captivated my attention more than most

LV 13

AntiGod_01

This a great story but I wanna ask the author is he gonna drop this??? I aint't seeing new chapters.I just wanna say to people reading fanfic there are many great fanfic except hp got or Marvel dc.

LV 4

Tom_Clany

I haven't read many fanfic regarding Apollo but I'm liking this one.

LV 4

DaoistnfUBW0

It's a very well thought work. One of the best fanfics I am reading.

LV 3

Little_El

Well written story. It shows that the author took his time and planned things well. My only problem is that I feel that Apollo shines a little too much, he is new and he plans too much. Freeing the Greeks from the Romans will be a bad idea. the level of dangerousness of the immortals is already sufficient, I hope that thanks to his knowledge, he will find a way so that it does not work on him. He said himself, the gods fought the titans just to replace them. I hope he will plan for self-improvement in a discreet way. Perhaps reach the cosmic level and surpass the immortals. in short, I look forward to read more.

LV 10

darren_burns

It would be interesting to see Apollo managing to become more powerful over Zeus at one point. I know this might be unlikely but still would be an intriguing path to see.

LV 1

_Hermaeus_Mora_

Gostei da história, bom ritmo e desenvolvimento. Estou ansioso para ver o que o futuro reserva para Apollo.

LV 13

EC_Wolf

Love it so far. The way they speak matches the era, the information, the spacing, the proper diaologue format, etc. This is definitely up there. I do have a request though for the author, and its not outlandish so I don't see how it could be an issue. Write it so the gods are truly portrayed as they were in the mythos, so the examples being the r*pe of medusa, the curse of heracles, the unfair beating and punishment of arachne, the r*pe of callisto and artemis unfairly punishing her and hunting her down, etc and etc to make it more realistic and brutal. Another request is to make Ares the honorable god that he really actually is instead of how modern media portrays him, because really, its only him, hestia and hades(depending on which mythos you believe on how the ordeal of him and Persephone went down) that are truly the good gods of olympus that are olympians (Zeus: R*pist Possidon:R*pist Hades: Depended R*pist Hera:Serial Murderer Artemis: Serial Murderer Aphoridte: Serial Murderer Dionyusus: R*pist Hermes: R*pist OG Apollo: R*pist

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Chintu_Mane

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