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A child in the (A) Marvel Verse accidentally discovers the truth about his life.
Discovering his ability is a lot more powerful now that he knows how the world will change.
Trying to ensure he is safe from the coming storm and finding the mutants might just be his best way to do this.
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i give 5 stars because you have potencial, please you must not drop this fic i thik that can be some thing great
Okay, for those who want a powerful cool dude who is just trying to make the world safe and prevent the fractured marvel that is Marvel comics. This is a good story. He's not a goodie two shoes, but he is a compassionate man trying to protect people as best hes able. i am excited to see where this goes.
heyyyyyyyyyyy.......update fasterrrrrrrrrrrrr........I want more........................ black widow is neededdddddd
dont drop the fic.........and update daily uptown 5 chaps...mi will 5 rate everyday........ .......... ..
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So the direction ur going is getting boring. Hes just going around and messing with worlds. He barely has a connection with anyone. Its the reason Superman stays on earth and saves people personally rather then create a bunch of kryptonian robots to do it. He need emotional connections to people so he has some form of empathy. This make him an empathetic character. Your MC is like a mountain strong YES insurmountable YES but also. People will never love a mountain they will never know the hopes and dreams or be conforted by rock. Even the connections to his pantheon are becoming flimsy with how he is behaving.