Otsutsuki In Multiverse

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AlberTheWildfire

currently on chapter 16. how do i say this...the story is bland? there's rarely any interaction between the mc and the side character, whenever he meet a character he will either kill them or use shisui ms. And so far there's no build up to make you feel like 'ooh he's gonna do it!' even tho we know he will achive it. One more thing there's no epic battle or scene, every moment in this fic feels stale or soulless?

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GoldBySilver

Grammar is very bad, the story is barely intelligible, characters suddenly show a change in personality without apparent reason. This novel is no very bad compared to the trash out there, but if you are a picky reader, do not read

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Kevin_Pollard

didnt have much hope at first but got better further in, like must fanfics you should go in with low expectations. ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Only Indian MC I've seen.

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AnotherAtlas

The mc is a mommy's boy so far. Quite annoying. You know what's more annoying? A 700 year timeskip. bRuH. I can give some credit for changing some stuff in story.

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VenerableDemon

The Mc is a massive disappointment, he's still thinking like a human and all. Mc should be more manipulative and evil than just being antihero. Expected a lot here. Some pros I would say is that it gets frequent updates and all so yeah and the world building is okay I guess but the character development is very bland. Everyone feels like doll, author is also giving human like emotions to his mother and kaguya is even more stupid. If you're someone who likes antiheros then this is one for you but if you're a evil Mc lover, don't even come this way. It's torture to read this

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Manuel_Official

Nice novel. Good to read. I Like it So am giving it 5 stars [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Uzumaki_Kushina_21

I'm giving you 5 stars bcz I knew it is going super good I mean if you read Avatar System Fanfic you will understand how creative author is[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] All the best I'm looking forward to this wonderful story

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Gh0st00

I like it it's pretty good so far nice read and hardly any mistakes with some steady progress I think he did a pretty good job writing this one I hope you keep it up and keep the chapters coming

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Ecokane

Nice novel good to read i Like it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Left_Nut_Of_Madara

great grammer with great spacing not many otususki fanfics out there so cant say much on that but its well thought out with no plot holes so far overall 10/10 for now

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

#cultivation Cultivation stories are one more mistake of humanity. And if you combine that with messy grammar, you have cosmic horror. It was not necessary to add cultivation to the story, the idea was good. Now, author is stuck in a sewer (called cultivation / xianxian / wuxia) and will not be able to get out.

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xlvlx

As expected of slime_king sama. Great start and huge fan of otsutsuki so i hope u don’t drop this anytime soon and i hope there’s romance! Maybe a mini harem? Anyways, here’s some rinnegan abilities i recommend! Absorb : Similar to momoshiki, u turn any being to a fruit/pill and when u eat ir u can gain the being’s memories and abilities. Time reversal : Reverse time on urself and anything u touch Loyal seal : Depending on strength diff, u can make any being loyal/enslaved. Nigh-infinite tsukiyomi : Basically infinite tsukiyomi but downgraded version/Upgraded version of tsukiyomi ? Kamui : Upgraded version of kamui. Amenotejikara : Sasuke’s rinnegan power Erase : Remove any power/jutsu/spell/magic attack Infinite kotoamatsukami : Can completely manipulate memories and feelings of anyone. The ability leaves no trace behind. Transfer : Opens a small portal and anything goes in, I would be able to open a second portal, and whatever went into the first portal will fall out but many times larger Counter-strike : Ability to redirect any attacks Kopīmasutā : Allows me to copy any ability for a limited period of time. U can save 3 abilities u copied. Buki no sakusai : Create weapons out of thin air smth like kinshiki Or cliche time stop ability ❤️

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Miguel_Goenaga

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Trafford

Even if it is a bit fast-paced, it is a very promising novel if it continues. The concept is interesting and finally, someone made a novel of Otsutsuki Clan / Interdimensional Conquest / Clan Building...

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greedy_reader17

good

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dark_knight_231

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