OniKen: Building a civilization with my demon blade system

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Miraishoto

A shameless/ biased five star review for my book because in my eyes i tried my best when it came time to cultivate this novel. IF you're interested in civilization building similar to 転生したらスライムだった件, or that time i got reincarnated as a slime, re monster, samurai 7 and other's, this is a book that effectively tries to mimic all that and put it into a edo period setting. a mesh between diplomacy and fights that would keep you on your toes. It's system will also mimic the one of the famous novel solo leveling and most other isekai as they were my inspiration starting this whole project of mine, the story of a child soon to be shogunate to rule over Japan. i hope you take time to read this novel of mine, and i would be over joyed if you were to enjoy it

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TheNunBarrel76

It is very fun yet traditional at the same time, it is a hybrid of sorts I think making me wonder what in the world will happen as this story continues. Intriguing storylines make me wonder what will happen next. A page turner that is amazing non the less.

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friendweed565

Saw this up on the fresh stories area, but neat little cover caught my eyes. I am glad I was able to scan through a bit, but because its new I can't say its updates are the best so decided to give it 10/10/10 across the board. I have no argument since the cast looks pretty good! Good luck little author

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GonnyGop

It's good . Overall interesting thing to read for now, not all that much else I can really say?

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Mashpotatoefien

Since the story is new I cant judge much of it yet, but def think its nice so far and promising in terms of fun plot, still looking through, but glad I am came across it all in all making it gem of a find really.

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tedixe2330

From what I can see its a pretty good start, a lot of good action going on and characters that challenge the main making the small cast reasonable by far. I can't wait for more updates!

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GooGoo43

This concept has a lot of potential! The opening line about human nature is thought-provoking and sets a dark, introspective tone that fits well with the theme of ambition and madness. The idea of samurai seeking a demon blade to rise to power is intriguing, blending historical elements with supernatural mystery. To make it stronger, consider adding a hint about the blade’s curse or the personal stakes for the samurai. Why does he want to be emperor? Overall, it’s a compelling premise that could explore the price of power and the danger of tampering with forces beyond human control.

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gikaba3786

Some of ya'll gonna call me a glazer for this, but I think its a great book and has so much potential to go big if it really wanted. The writer obviously isn't perfect and knows there is some stuff, but its really not that bad really. The main character gives off the vibes of like the basic shonen protag like Demon Slayer or that other one with the guy with the scarred wife, but great characters and good dramatic atmosphere which got me going for more! I am gonna keep going forward to see how Mirai grows!

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rasewa2222

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I would like to say right off the bat this is a well written story despite only having four chapters. They know what they want this story to be and the characters feel real enough to have emotions for their plight. It has an old fashion Japanese setting. I can tell by their writing style this isn't their first rodeo and I am impressed with how vivid the descriptions are. I want to wish the author goodluck as they keep approaching this series. Respectfully Mirai asked me to move this comment over so I am doing so ^^