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One Punch Man: Death Amends

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A former police and gang leader on his deathbed dies and is somehow reincarnated in the world of one punch man. With no knowledge of what the world could toss on his way, he struggles hard even dying a lot of times just to get stronger.

Read on as he faces dangerous enemies ranging from monsters, villains, aliens, gods, and most of all himself.

"You want to feel the thrill of fighting again right Saitama?." I looked at Saitama with a smile on my face.

"Are you one of those thugs, trying to pick a fight at me again?" Saitama looks at him with veins rising at his head.

"Let's just find out then."

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The story will start 22 years before the cannon.

Arcs for his character development:
Z-city(Short arc)
Ninja Village Arc
House of Evolution Arc
Wandering (Short Arc)
Dojo Arc

After that, the start of Canon happens and the plot will be moving from the point of view of our MC.

MC's powers:
He has the ability to get permanently stronger whenever he dies on extreme stimulus, so dying without stimulus is not gonna make him get to OP levels, by saying he gets stronger that means a permanent boost, enhancing his body by giving him more physical strength, mental capability, reflexes, regeneration and also the time he would resurrect himself when he dies becomes much shorter.

I know his powers are vague for now because I wanted readers to make a few assumptions on what his powers would be so that I could add it if it naturally inclines with the power I had thought out for him.

Just to make you understand my difficulties in writing this...

English is my third language so expect my grammar to be bad, and this is my first time writing a story so please be gentle towards me. UwU(Some people cannot understand that this is the first time I wrote a fanfic as you can see in the comment section,*Sigh*)

I struggle a lot on storytelling, so if you guys could recommend some advice I would listen with my ears open, just to maybe make amends for your dissatisfaction.

Chapter release is not consistent as I focus more on the details of the story.

I only own my OCs in this fanfic I created. The world-building and known characters belong to the OG creator called ONE and are supported by theories by zhoniin on yt.

I added my interpretations and will make the world a bit more deep.

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Kw0z
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Worst fanfic I’ve ever read 😂 At most, maybe one thing each chapter is logical; everything else doesn’t make a single bit of sense. Also, having your MC who was previously an old man with a lot of life experience call someone mommy as soon as he’s born is actually so gross and unreadable. And last but not least, it felt like I was reading MTL on crack with your horrible grammar. If you’re native to English, please get a tutor or go to the hospital and get a test or something done for autism, but if you’re a foreigner, just stick to your own language if you’re the type to settle for this monstrosity of an English form.

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Dumb_Racoon

Author here! I am obligated to review my own novel so I'll just put a 3 stars yet still! I hope you enjoy my novel, I have a lot of plans and I already researches the One punch man world. I just hope that people would support my endeavor in writing this because I am writing my very first novel, I accept constructive criticism and I will respect everyone's understanding of the world. I even listened to some theories so I would advice anyone who reads this that you might be spoiled if you haven't read the latest chapter in the manga. Just please don't be mad at me when I do mistakes, it's a learning process for me and I want this fanfic to be acceptable. No harem, I have already foreshadowed who his partner is in this world. Also, there won't be any changes on the canon plot except that some people know his identity due to the reason that he had met them. That is all, thank you for understanding, I will sleep now and have a great day!

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Buckeners

This is good cant wait for more hope you send him back to one punch man world EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE E E E E e e e e e e

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