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One Piece: Sukuna Template (COMPLETE)
3.58 (22 เรตติ้ง)
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A psychopathic man gets killed while running from the cops, and no surprise, he goes to hell where the literal devil gives him a mission to fulfil while in the world of One Piece... Create Chos!
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Just not very good overall, plenty of misspelled words, bad syntax, and an edgy ahh main character (which I should have expected just from the interaction of serial killer him with the cops tbh). Not criminally bad, just mediocre.
Great story with an actual evil main character lol 😂 he’s a villain like a real villain not some guy with a villain tag 💀 That man is a menace to the point that I want him to replace Blackbeard and imu in the story because then will have a great main villain for one piece although he probably would win and destroy the world ☠️ My only “ complaint” is that I don’t feel that jjk template’s will be of use in higher tier worlds like bleach or dragon ball so later on if he travels to other worlds he either has to learn their power system or get a stronger template system than his You can fix that to some extent by making him a prodigy but there are some abilities that can’t be beaten by training such as the godlike abilities of aizen , Yhwach or the gods of destruction and Zeno Unless he gets the wheel of mahoraga and becomes stronger with him as he gets stronger that way he can proudly say NUH! UH ! I’d adapt 🗿
Be proud...... You have a good story... . . . . This doesn't allow me to give it a 20/10 but I would give it if I could. This doesn't allow me to give it a 20/10 but I would give it if I could.
From my moral or reality standpoint this is a psychopath killer story.......I give -♾️ starts 🤡 From a fictional stand point This is a really cool novel, amazing fighting scene and all that so yeah 5 start from me
I only have one thing to say about this story, it's really cool, really cool.I liked the first three chapters the most, I'll be waiting for the next ones!
Spelling mistakes, wrong pronouns. MC is a disgusting mass murdering rapist.
It would be good for the author of this to seek psychological help, I'm a little worried about how his psyche is currently. Nothing against stories like MC villain, but this is a bit much. Good luck and God bless, my friend.
cringe murder hobo shit no depth no goal just kill because author want MC to look edgy.
Warning : The author is an edgelord who thinks creating his mc a rapist is cool by giving an excuse that he is a psychopath. I bet he hasn't even seen a psychopath once in his life. The mc is also a coward who runs with tails in between his legs once he encounters someone stronger than him. The mc written by an author in his story often depicts his/her personality. I fear that this kind of man is roaming freely in society. God knows one day he also tries to become ‘cool' like his mc and committ these heinous crimes.
I honestly love the MC! The negative opinions are only people who can't stand seeing a really evil person and not the typical antagonist "with codes or honor."
A piece of garbage in short. Read at your own risk.He who warns has warned. ............................................................... ............................................................... ............................................................... ...............................................................
What is this dumb story.... Protagonist is literally a psychopath killing everyone he find even a little irritating. He then rapes if he likes a girl and then thinks for other as trash as if he was any better. One piece already a world where any soul will have to make chaos while fighting against world government. But he just choose an annoying path of killing and raping people here and there.
Def not for everyone. But I like it pretty good. At least give it a try if you like an evil mc. MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE AUTHOR-SAMA
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This is fic was a journey start to finish I enjoyed it very much it was one of the best villain fics I’ve read in my over a year of reading fanfics sad to see it end but hopefull for the authors next fics if you want a good villain with not a overwhelming amount of smut this is the fic for you and i highly recommend people who come across this read it
There is no depth. The MC just goes around killing everything. There is also Rаpe stuff. If you like that good for you but this is not for me