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One Piece: Gambling to the Top (Rewrite)

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Josh, a young man thrust into a perilous world where strength, agility, and cunning determine survival, discovers he possesses a mysterious system that grants him the ability to draw powerful rewards from a lottery-like game. With luck as unpredictable as the dangers that surround him, Josh must navigate a treacherous landscape of pirates, bounty hunters, and secret organisations. Each draw offers the potential for life-changing abilities, from strength-enhancing potions to mastery of deadly combat techniques, but with every gain comes new risks.

With danger lurking at every corner, Josh’s luck may be his greatest weapon—or his ultimate downfall. Will he be able to master his abilities, survive the deadly trials ahead, and carve out a place for himself in this world where the odds are stacked against him?

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This is a rewrite of a fanfic by Blazuki. I do not own any of this content, be it from One Piece or Blazuki. I am posting this purely for entertainment's sake with no ulterior motives.
This OG fanfic is completed and has quite a high rating, which made me curious. After reading a few chapters, I realised that it's great, with its only downfall being a lack of editing (grammatical mistakes, wording in certain sentences, etc.). This is where I come in, with the task (given by yours truly) of rewriting the novel and adjusting it slightly by correcting any mistakes in grammar and 'sentence-structures' I notice.
Therefore, if you feel like contributing in any way, please refer to Blazuki's account (found his patreon link: www.patreon.com/Blazuki). All I'm doing is trying to make an already great fanfic just slightly better.
Please leave a review below or a comment in the chapters with some advice to help me do this work justice. This is my first time doing this sort of thing, so I welcome all the help I can get. Thank you and hope you enjoy.

PS: Again, the original creator is Blazuki, direct all the love to him.

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Original synopsis:
A young man finds himself in a dangerous world with a system that allows him to play his chances in a lottery game. What will he do, with luck that varies, and only his head to bet on?

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Glebby_Boi

Shameless review by yours truly. I can’t say much about my skills, but this is an attempt at polishing a gem of a story. I will be posting editted versions of chapters as I read through the original novel by Blazuki. If you want more detailed and OG reviews and opinions on the fic, I suggest going to his novel with the same title and looking through there. All I can say is that, imo, so far this story has been a very fun read and I can’t wait to complete it! I just hope that my efforts will help y’all experience the story in a more comfortable way, or at least promote Blazuki’s ff. I welcome constructive criticism, but please remember that I’m trying to keep it close to the original work, so no major adjustments will be made. Thank you and enjoy!

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UREGO
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I realized this is a rewrite of a fantastic fanfiction, and to be honest was one of my very first fanfiction I read. An amazing work I enjoyed it very much story was will done, and all I can say so far is the rewire is coming along well thank you for taken the time to rework it

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ichigo7ma

Before I read this novel I'm gonna gave you ~5 stars because the original Gambling to the Top was wonderful and the *MC not so OP . I had enjoy time when I read it.. And I hope you'll get this Fanfic better

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Haze_
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This is just to improve the original and its doing good at that so far

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JRCaste

This fanfic is very dear to me, its one of the first Fanfic ive read and is the reason why I picked up One Piece. Its' one of the best decisions I've made in my life watching that anime

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