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One Piece : Dungeon Trading System
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Year 1521, One Piece World.
This year suddenly on the island of Shabondy Archepelago appeared a building that had a sign that read "Guild".
This building provides a variety of things ranging from dungeons that have an area of more than 10,000 kilometers for each floor, has very strong monsters, and also has various kinds of exchangeable items that can attract a lot of attention from everyone.
The appearance of this "Guild" began to shock many parties, especially during the opening week of the "Guild" there were already guests like the Pirate King's Right Hand, Shichibukai, Yonkou, and also an Admiral who came to visit there.
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The amount of bot reviews on this novel are insane. From chapter one, the writing is horrible. Random changes in names, grammar that doesn’t make sense, it’s bad. Don’t know how this is rated highly.
Writer here. Thank you for friends who have come to read this story. For those who like it, welcome and for those who don't like it, no problem. I just want to write down the ideas that are in my head. Besides, this fanfiction has poor translation. So I hope you guys can endure it. And also for anyone who wants to rewrite fanfiction, just send your email. I'll send you the original later. Currently there are 20 chapters.
It's an interesting story. I look forward to more chapters. The are a few grammatical errors which are still readable but may be somewhat annoying. All in all it's a new fanfic with an interesting concept and I believe it has a lot of potential.
I quite like this story, I had never seen something like this in a one piece fanfic, I would appreciate it if you didn't leave it as it is a very good fanfic.
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yo this is a super goed story, i am not going to lie the writing quality is not the best but its good enough, but i never read anything like this, I LOVE IT!!!!, but don't over do it, make your own plans and tempo, dont over work youself.
Terrible quality, worst editing i have ever seen. Some mistranslations are so bad i have never seen them even while reading MTL
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This is quickly turning into my new favorite fanfic, Only suggestion i would make is that the author eventually finds an editor to come back through and fix any small mistakes such as names getting mixed up and what not.
very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yo!!! This ff has an interesting concept which I rarely see in some other sites, as for the "a bit too chatty" I've seen in some paragraph comments, believe me I've seen worse to the point where they are asking the mc's name then mc tells pretty much his whole family's history, and the fact that they only met a couple of hours, anyways for the grammar I think it's fine I guess, readable, I have grown an immunity to those from the MTL that I've read, suggestion Mr. Author, you can use "grammarly" it can improve the grammar and it's free so you won't have to worry on subscriptions. Overall I think this one is good, I'm not that focus too much on such details, I just enjoy the story HAHAHAHAAH.
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Wooaahhh.. It'd a really really great story!! It's a new type story, i never read story about guild in every fanfiction i already read before.. It's really interesting!!! There is too many wrong word/grammar, but I still understand it (just please fix it) 😁😁👍 You're doing a really great job author san.. Can't wait to see next chapter 😍😍👍👍👍
I must say its a very good and one of a kind fanfic novel I have read till now. the story development is good, the unique way of the system. love it. hope that author will not drop it in between.
Great idea a very different angle from other stories which showcases the authors originality and great story telling. The story is very interesting and has great potential. The story is in its on lane
the concept is quite good but the writing quality is bad...repeated words and grammar aside, his and her are mixed, wrong words used for a lot of things, and sudden Japanese word used in between breaks the flow. characters are also described in a young master's way... It's a good time to pass if you can gloss over these detail while reading.