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Hello, I am Zereeo_Ak.
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For the staffs from Royal Road, It is me who is trying to upload in your site. I also hope that I would be allowed to upload my other stories without trouble at your site.
Thank you.
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I am the author of this fanfic. This idea was inspired by a fellow author who is literally writing the story with a slightly different settings. I give him(Baphomet_19) credit for inspiring me. So, I won't listen to anyone saying I copied the story. (⌐■_■)
Even though the idea was inspired, I am taking the story in a new direction.
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Copyright.
And all the DC characters and elements belong to the DCcomics and all the Ben 10 elements belong to Man of Action. I do not own anything except my own original characters.
Check it out and see if I am doing a good work,(～￣▽￣)～
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Now to the story.
This story will focus on two lead,
1) Kara Zor-El (Supergirl), a time remnant(From The Flash movie), ending up in another earth after being saved by a mysterious being with the quest to fight to protect her new home.
2) Zion, a boy from the countryside who want to go on an adventure. His dream is full filled after he get an alien device that could change him into many forms, ( Yes, it's Omnitrix( omniverse version)) but at the same time he also learn that his world was not so big anymore.
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This story will also contain some of my original characters with their unique power, one for now. And If you have some questions or confusion, comment me. I am not well versed in DC universe setting.
So, I would really appreciate if you give me advice. Okay o(￣▽￣)√.
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Man, the title really isn't catchy, but I decided to give it a chance and I was surprised. The novel is very good, especially the character interactions
I like the ideas you incorporated with the mc, and his intellectual thinking capacity. He has a broad perspective and for me personally, the way everything plays out is very well constructed. I’m intrigued to c where this story goes, keep it up 👍
This is straight up Fire the way its done and executed are a good change from the norme plus the MC keeps a List of things to do or not to do
I used to scroll past this one all the time because it didn't look interesting enough, now I am just glad I gave it a chance and it is not that bad it will sometime to get used but it worth it at the end
The story started well but everything goes to waste when he goes to Mars with Kara to terraform it and begins a conquest of Mars and Luwgo of Earth, from there everything went down. The MC proposes a plan and then does something else, then chapters pass without knowing about him so he can read a little about what he will do but it doesn't work out, a good number of people start dying out of nowhere and everything gets horrible 4/10 for the story, I don't recommend it to people looking for something fairly serious to read or to those who read garbage for entertainment
I really liked the story. At first, I didn't understand why things were done a certain way, but then everything fit together magnificently. I like how you write the dialogues; they don't feel forced. I recommend it, keep up the good work.
Mc has one he lets his allies know how much power he has, which is not a good thing. Everything is not problem in DC universe