NARUTO: THE POSION TRAGEDY

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UchihaZenn

Good novel, the story is quite interesting. suggestions for writers of this novel, please put different marks such as speaking : "...." , thoughts : '....', speaking system : [....] and give pov. for this story I hope the MC pair is not from OCs such as Temari, Karin, Ino or Hinata so that readers are interested. I hope MC will be a little smart in handling the situation and smart in manipulating everyone or politics which will bring MC a better life because he is a transmigration (rencarnation). MC should not be too OP at the beginning and hope that there is an epic moment in every fight that makes it grow (badas). Thanks 😁

LV 11

MADZ_HACKER

Hey its author san and Im sorry but I gotta give five stars just so I can start getting people to see my fic. And i now its not perfect 3.5 at best since just rushed it out so I can see what people think of it.

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MasterOfDeath7777

Dude....i like it👏👏👏👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌[=UPDATE=] [=UPDATE=] [UPDATE=] MORE/MORE/MORE/MORE/MORE/

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Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Its well a bit ruff but it has potential so ill support ya kid. But you just need to extend it to a least 1.5k word and try to add 100 words per chapter to help it be more worth while to read.

Well since I just found out that form is a thing I don't know why I was recommended this since I licked modern and romance but Ill jut review since i have nothing better to do.