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(Don't expect too much.)
This story will be outside the canon and before canon will start, many events will happen that will change future.
Love interest is OC, and character is OC too. As for future interests, I don't know as I don't plan the story. I did create a plan but I get bored of writing like that.
The MC will have too much potential and he will become strongest in the world.
Hiruzen and Danzo will be corrupted.
This story will show a few dark things of Ninja World
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เขียนรีวิว2 chapters you can read and then you can quit........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
First chapter didn't really pull me in but wasn't so bad that I wanted to just give up before reading at least first 10 chapters. Senrigan (dojutsu from Naruto) is an interesting choice, I didn't see it much in fanfics, so that's definite plus... and he actually uses it. Even if I don't really like how he goes about using it, but well that's on me. There are problems with formatting (like missing dashes, period when it should have been comma, semicolons instead of quotation marks, wrong names and words), something I can usually ignore, but story is kinda dull so annoyance of those repeating mistakes is not really something I want to experience. And most of those are easily avoidable by giving the chapter a careful read before posting. Overall? Not really bad, but not realy interesting. 6/10.
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Well, the starting is interesting, to say the least. the story has an average premise, and I hope the author doesn't make lemon the focal point. by the pace this is going I don't think it would be long for ti to end, lets see what more it has in hiding
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What do you mean with " As for future interests"? Love interests? If so, shouldn't it have a harem tag? And if it's something else, it's not very clear.