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My Triling System

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[ Ding! You have successfully obtained the fiftieth Triling Ring ]

[ You now have access to enter the Mystic Cave guarded by the Nine Dragons ]

[ New Quest: Vampires approaching. Stop them from invading the Mystic Cave by ordering the dragons to protect you and your men. You have one week before the vampires reach the foot of the cave. Learn how to tame and control the nine dragons before they arrive]

[ Failure to do so will lead to your demise and all the fifty rings you've gathered will be a waste. The magical world will be destroyed and vampires will take over the land. You will be reborn in the next 250 years and would have to start gathering the fifty rings once again ]


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Rejected, due to being an human in the land of elves, Kevin was banished and casted into the river the very day he was born. But fate said he would live as he was rescued by the very person who casted him into the river.

Every mage when they reach the age sixteen were told to attend the mage academy and Kevin, the abandoned human who had overheard the conversation of some students, got excited to attend this academy.
He asked from his guardian if he could attend the academy but unfortunately, he was denied, all because of him being an human and not an Elf. At that moment, he became angry and had locked himself up in his guardian's workshop, that was a room full of all types of magical items.

But while in the room, Kevin had spotted a golden ring that instantly glowed as soon as it touched his bloody fingers. Surprisingly, he was given a system that granted him the opportunity to be an Elf. But what he discovered was that, he wasn't just an elf but a fairy and also a human.

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    Will_of_Thousands

    It's a good concept. my only issue so far is the mc is really naive. It's justified given his status but sometimes it seems over the top. like for example becoming friends with the people who tried to kill you previously and then tried to rob you during the second time encountering them. It just seems not well executed or thought out. All in all tho it's a good concept. Will be keeping an eye on it.

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    2yr
    ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
    Yuvit
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    Author ur cover is misleading hihi I mean I thought we would have a Female MC but it turned out to be a male mc (not complaining though) unless the elf there represents the FL here I read few chapters, so far the plot seems nice and there is always this element you drop in each chap that makes u wonder if its related to the identity of the MC, or perhaps I'm overthinking hhhh (like the ring, I wonder if the ring is actually related to mc's father) Anyway the mystery or my obssession with his father really makes pe think too much, because that's a dark point for me so I'm really obssessed with it

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    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Josh_Cameron

    Good harem novel for you to pass through your time, I won't say that it's the best as you can spot several lacking factor, but it's on its way, 5 stars for effort

    1yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    CSManga
    LV 13 Badge

    The Author😁: I know right, I’ve not updated for four weeks, i have my reasons please try and understand, I’m so sorry. But I’m glad to announce that I’ll start updating starting from the date (21-10-2022, range 12am to 11:59pm in the evening) GMT+8 singapore time. Thanks for the power stones and golden tickets, i got a little hope seeing that you guys love it. i thought this novel will go under, but you guys gave me an inspiration to continue writing this book.

    2yr
    ดู 14 การตอบกลับ
    Willy_Adamms

    After a careful reading from A to Z of the chapters available, I took note of the following. This is according to what I read, so don't comment here if what I read is different from what you read. The MC is still immature to me, probably because of his age but it's normal for someone of that age. He's hadn't been able to associate himself in the public so it's understandable that he couldn't talk anyhow as he's trying to learn from what others are saying. That's like calling him an introvert trying to become an extrovert. But you guys want him to become an extrovert all of a sudden which is wrong. I'm glad the author didn't turn him into an extrovert all of a sudden. The MC is going according to the flow of the story, which is awesome. He is the type of character that suits the plot of the story. Then in the future he will take steps and say things of wisdom which will incredible surprise others and himself. Second thing I noticed is that the story is not talking all about being strong or system all the time. It is just like a normal story and if an incident is about to happen, the author would bring up the system to make him overcome the problem and by chance might make him grow stronger when the problem has been overcame. That's all I have to say and sorry I would have given you full star but giving full star all the time is stressful to me and it's more respectful if I put it this way. This is my second review, I hope it helps you in a good way. By the way, your books are amazing, keep it up!

    2yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Skull_emoji

    I just started reading this book and OMG, I was hooked to it and couldn't let go. The pace, world settings and the main character are well described. Can't wait for your next chapters🥺🥺

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Zekril

    He is too naive Beta Self centered Selfish I could see him becoming some young master because he is strong. The quality of mc is bad and its not for me.

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    MoonlightOfure

    This book is nice. Not a fan of system novel but this is cool. With the first five chapters I have read, the book is going somewhere. Kudos Author!

    2yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    sahejRocks

    Man, the novel is too interesting I say!! I need more chapters fast!! I am really happy I clicked on that icon. The cover's the main cause of that btw..haha😁

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    joshua_jt3

    The first thing that intrigued me about this novel was the cover and title so I decided to give it a read. I'm so glad I did. The author's writing skill is good in its own way. The world-building and character design make it a good, enjoyable read. It's a must try.

    2yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Sophie2018

    MC is stupid and wimp. ........,............

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    xXDarkMesterXx

    Is good, but the mc is dumb and too innocent, as he trusts the people who tried to kill him, it's so stupid, it seems that the MC is a child.

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Dark_knight234

    The way the emotions are demonstrated through the pen. The way I'm able to picture the characters and just the sheer interest I have gotten from reading this book, ... chef's kiss😂😂😂

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Taylor9189

    writing quality leaves much to be desired. I highly recommend getting an editor or finding a fan of your work who speaks fluent English and asking them to do it for you Story development: You get a lot of filler in the chapters, taking away from any action or dialog. MC is overly dense. Despite how he was raised, it's completely inexcusable. Character design is bland there's nothing about their details that makes any sort of mental image come to mind.

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Crown_Silver

    spoilers Ahead!!! 🌼 🌼 🌼 So you really think I'll be dropping a spoiler, lol,.. I can't believe you fell for that😂 Now, you're laughing 😂😂 Anyways, the book is interesting I must say. Good job Author

    2yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Nzr150cc

    This book has great potential! The story is quite interesting and I like it.

    2yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Tres_Aguila

    Just like the title of this totally captivating book, the book is indeed a thrilling one. Reading the synopsis alone you got me instantly hooked and I can't wait to readmore of the chapters. The character design and the story development is impeccable. Kudos to the author.👍👍👍💯💯💯

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    WW2Caa1
    LV 10 Badge

    Guess I'm gonna be giving this book a 4.8 star rating. I can't explain why I'm hooked to this particular book. The MC is smart and intelligent and I hope he gets stronger than he is, gets revenge from mother for abandoning him and leaving him out to be killed and maybe become a king and kick the elf king away. lol. Well, I dropped my review👌

    2yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ

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