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My System Turns Anime Bloodlines Into Cultivation Technique

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reborn in a new world with a lottery system that can give many anime abilities, but I have to collect people's rage... this is going to be troublesome

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naraiz_ryhall

▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆ - Some time names are mixed and confused gender sentences (like when MC meats FMC it keeps referring as ''the young man'') and some acceptable grammatical mistakes ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ - at now daily update but if you update 3 chap in one week it will be suffice ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ - I found it quite smoothly going ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆ - a hot-headed MC. I was going to give it 4 ☆ but in chap11 his suicidal tendency needs to tone down. I'm a little disappointed in it ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆ -It needs some work in my opinion, but you did a good job on it till now... Reading Status: C11 The total score 4.0

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2yr
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ShatteredMusic

The premise of the story along with the writing quality is good, It may not seem like the story is short since it only has 8 chapters, however the author makes sure each chapter is extremely long. (at least when comparing to a lot of other web novels.) Thank you Author

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2yr
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NeonPLay250

just blood from the eyes. The writing quality is as bad as it gets. this is terrible. The idea is good but the execution just sucks. Correct the grammar/translation. I wanted to read but the main idea is lost.

2yr
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Br4tsch
LV 14 Badge

not recomended many inconsistencies kinda every chapter. Bad writting and kinda dumb Mc the first few chapter where enjoyable but ca. at the chapter 10 mark i had to force myself to continue.

2yr
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Atom_Guy

This is really fun to read, how is it not more famous. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
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skysiam

a good read love this Novel thanks for good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
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James_Blake

The idea of this story is great but the writing Quality Kinda ruins it I was barely Able to get through 6 chapters Because the wrong ting QuaLity made it feel like I had to force my self to keep going and that just made it so I couldn’t Enjoy Reading it

2yr
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SAURON_

extremely good just wish you gave a picture of all important characters and maybe even a side story where mc meets parents again you can either kill them or allow mc to forgive them but not care about them also please make a way for mc to seal the demon inside his wife.

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2yr
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iQuazza

Are you gonna continue this fanfic or did you drop. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
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GloryForAll

Its a good story with a good background and concept. Has many grammar, naming, and development issues though. It could use a rewrite, but still a good read. Easily a 5 star if those issues could be toned down.

2yr
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SAURON_

please allow Sora or Mc gain broly bloodline or even chumber bloodline so he has a evolved form of super-sayjin. check comments chapter 38 for more information on idea's

2yr
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dope_is_my_name

The author just copy and pasted top tier providence at the beginning I mean it’s a little better now but it still has elements from top tier providence

2yr
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ZHODIAXK

Actually this is really good, it's just that at the beginning it feels like reading another novel, very similar in terms of the initial plot, I don't know in the future I can only hope for something new.

2yr
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NiklasXY

extremly good, super long chapters, we need to get this fic a rating. need to fill in the rest of the nescessary words. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

2yr
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ArzeusT
LV 13 Badge

That ff is one of the few things that make me look forward to enjoying my tedious day. ---------------------------------------------------------------------please if you are the author don't stop writing this ff, and if you are a translator don't stop translating.

2yr
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Donworry

it wasn't so bad at first but after awhile it gets pretty confusing to read because the author keeps mixing genders, names, cultivation realms and power levels. I remember in one chapter I thought sora was stronger than Ling Han but apparently not and for a whole chapter I thought Ling Han was hanging out with his sister buy it was sora. honestly if there was better grammar I would've given this a higher rating.

2yr
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SAURON_

amazing just wish for faster upload time ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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