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My System Powers Up My Crew Except Me
4.15 (27 เรตติ้ง)
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Bang is transported from Earth into a world where pirates and adventurers rules the land and the seas. They are bestowed power from leaders after swearing fealty to them.
“Welcome owner, to the world of Mundu”
“What? Are you a system? Did I reincarnate like those characters from novels?”
“Yes owner, I am here to help you”
“YES!!!!!, what cool powers do I have? Do I control gravity? Can I use all the elements here? Oh! Oh! Can you help me master all kinds of powers?!”
“No master, I can only power up your allies”
“What???????”
“Please follow my instructions to assemble your crew.”
This is not your regular power fantasy. Well, it is a power fantasy but not just on the main character but also on the side characters. The main character completes quests in order to recruit crew members or power them up. This is kind of a slow paced novel because character development will be a big factor in this story. Kind of new to writing so any criticism will be welcome. If you want a reason to read this novel, read the spoiler below.
*****SPOILERS****** the crew doesn’t get powerful with no reason. They get powerful only because of character development so expect some emotional scenes for breakthroughs. See if you could spot the progression of emotions in the crew, and how it affects their powers.
The mc may seem annoying/stupid at first but please try to read more. My writing gets better, and the mc will have character development that will make him better.
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4.15
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history began to take a solid turn in the world and its Germans have not been very well presented yet, but the relationships between the characters are very well worked and the protagonist's development is promising the author managed to create a certain harmony between the personal relationships and the protagonist's goals and event during the arc I will wait and see what will happen until chapter 100 then I will give a concrete opinion quite promising by my guess has the potential to rise to the top of the weekly ranks
I'd rather be dead than have such a system, seriously this story doesn't captivate me in any way ... 😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷😷
I didnt read it and i dont plan to,, cause i only read novel about mc not him giving buff to his crew... I gave 5 stars cause the sypnosis of this book is quite unique,, good job author for doing something unique... and you reading this go give this book a try to support author...
Can't keep reading. Authot censors "****" for some absurd reason, main character has 0 sense and can't make choices for himself. Title should be "A Novel Where The System is the Protagonist."
The reason I started reading this novel is because it's rare to see a pirate story that isn't a one piece fanfic and the system and world seems unqiue and with lots of potential. The reason I did not give 5 star or that one day I may drop it is because the MC hasn't done a single thing that the system hadn't told him to do like (run here) or (say this). This is obviously my personal opinion but I enjoy system type novel where the system only assists the MC and not one where the MC is overly reliant or even subservient to the system. I hope things will slowly change after a few chapters.
Useless system.... plot make no sense... and author really love to **** his own MC... like many other useless system in this WN... and plot progresss make no sense of which and which direction it should do...
First few chapters were a really hard to read for the mc’s personality to his mannerisms it makes me cringe just thinking about it. Author you should edit the first few chapters a bit if just totally change them.
Havent read the whole thing, gonna give u five stars but bruh, who gives powers to the people around you but leave nothing for urself. People who have this power only wait to be taken advantage.
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Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! 💪💪
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The plot is excellent and the fact that you created a new power system I loved it, I like it when an author innova tes. What I don't understand is because he is a kapitan and not a captain. This was translated by google translator. PD:good job
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This is a story about a selfish and antisocial mc who learns to care about others on his way to learn to be a proper leader This is a story about a reserved kid who learns to be outgoing and confident to be a dependable member This is a story about an arrogant and troublesome kid who learns to be humble as he becomes an unyeilding and mighty fighter There are plenty more characters to be introduced with their own flaws and aspirations to conquer. Read as they overcome their own demons (literally and figuratively) and conquer them for their own use. Be amazed at how they discover the origins of their powers in their conquest to go around the world. Prepare to have a heartwarming and heart crunching moments that will ineviatbly bring them closer together.
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