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my new life of magic (COMPLETED)

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In the majestic kingdom of Equestria, a mysterious event leads to a new life for a young human with no ties to his past. Magically transported and reborn as a newborn unicorn, Starbright is found and adopted by the noble Nightingale family in the capital city of Canterlot. Gifted with extraordinary intelligence and magical abilities, Starbright quickly becomes a prodigy in magic.

In his new life, Starbright forms a deep friendship with Twilight Sparkle, a young and talented unicorn dedicated to her magical studies. Together, they explore the secrets of magic, face challenges, and inspire each other to reach new heights. Under the mentorship of great sages of Equestria, such as the legendary Starswirl the Bearded, their bond strengthens and their abilities grow.

As they grow, Starbright and Twilight share dreams and adventures, learning valuable lessons about responsibility, wisdom, and the importance of friendship. As destiny guides them towards great achievements, their friendship becomes the foundation of their strength and determination.

*Reborn Magic* is an epic tale of self-discovery, growth, and the unbreakable magic of friendship, set in the charming and wondrous world of *My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic*.

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Elektro_Tomek

This story is mostly written by Ai. There is a lack of logical consistency between chapters, characters introduced in one chapter can disappear and not appear. Dialogues are written in a way that barely allows for proper reading, there are often repetitions for entire paragraphs in the style of writing of a hundredth intelligence. In addition, there is a lack of depth to the world, characters with great influence are invoked but only appear for dialogues (Starswil, Celestia, etc.)

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