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My Life as Ash (pokemon)
4.49 (35 เรตติ้ง)
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I woke up as ash in Delia’s womb
Power hungry person decides that the main character hasn’t used a tiny bit of his potential. After reincarnation, he believes that he will get all the itches and become overpowered, maybe rule over a country or two.
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I am considering to go to avatar world next. He will be reborn as aang after the ice berg incident. The world will be sokka gendebent Tom boy with shy katara in normal life and slowly badass katara
absolutely LOVE this fic and cant wait for more. IM NOT JOKING I WANT MOREEEEE. ugh I loved it so much. I agree with all your points at the beginning as well. please tell me if you are doing single chapter uploads or chunk uploads and if you have a schedule for updates
The stupid description killed me. Just that sentence alone makes this a 5 star novel in my opinion.
As much as I love the summary can there be a bit more detail. Still going to read though, seems like a good read. ------------- Filler for word count ------------
Everything In The Novel Was Ok Except The Writing Quality (or whatever you call it) To Me It Was Really Messy And It Ruined My Reading experience
JUST HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS FAN FIC (LIKE MOST OTHERS DO) AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥
I was confused why I dropped it when I read the first chapter but after like 2 more I understand why........ started off decent for webnovel chapters but there's just flight character bashing and unrealistic character interactions
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read😍. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far👌
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Author-san!! Don't mind the low score I'm just balancing it out since u gave yourself 4 5-star ratings yourself. But the fanfic is still really good!
Good story. The writing is a bit fast paced and the charecters are pretty nice. Overall not bad but please for the love of god get a proofreader or something. The grammar isn’t bad per say and there are only 1 or 2 mistakes in a chapter but still it annoys me
It's so-o-o-o-o-o-o coo-oool[img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend] I really liked this version of Pokemon! In the original, everything is more boring and monotonous and Ash is dumb there. Doesn't change at all!
Author here. I forgot to say that I will be uploading one chapter daily and that I will only be writing two stories at any one point in time to prevent exhaustion. The next story will be avatar the last airbender but that will only begin after my other Harry Potter fic ends. That fic is on chapte 33 and will end soon on around chapter 50
Born as Ash meaning a very good world background. The updates are stable 1 - 2 Chapters per day. He treats his Pokemon well and also traims with them. Overall just writing Qualit affects the reviews rating.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Author here. Thanks for the support on this story . Please let me know if I can make it better in any way shape or form. I appreciate any and all criticisms.
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A good read, a few grammar mistakes, but perfectly readable. so far interesting story development.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I kinda like the fast pace of the story. I don’t know if Serena will be included in the harem, ‘cause he did go to the training camp for her but he didn’t express his emotions so we don’t really know what he thinks about her, besides that she is a « a good girl ». Maybe try and show a bit of his emotions more often?
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Thanks for the positive support. I realized that my style of writing matches the pokemon world very well. Throw away one-demential characters, summary like story, minor time skips and lots of plot holes. It’s basically perfect for me.