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My dream to be The Greatest Trainer
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An anime fan who watches anime for fun gets a chance to reincarnate as Ash Ketchum in Pokemon world with a few wishes ( with a little tweaks). Watch as he tries to accomplish the dream he shares with the original Ash- to be the greatest Trainer.
Disclaimer:
I don't own Pokemon or Ash Ketchum or any other characters.
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Wishes for a creature that isn’t even a Pokémon to be his Pokémon..... like why? Also wishes to have other anime characters be his travel companions which is weird itself since there are so many characters you can choose from in Pokémon idk but just these two things bothered me after reading this and when the “white elephant” was first introduced I had to drop this because why choose Pokémon world if you wish for a non Pokémon it’s dumb
It's a really good fanfic, one of the few that makes me wait everyday for updates. I really like how you introduced aura/psychic powers as i like it when the trainer can actually also fight instead of relying only on his pokemons, chapter 9 got me worried a bit about the story but you explained it later and did not make it overly op. Great story so far.
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I love this book and I hope the author uploads more chapters but is staying safe
I have major problems with this fan fiction. To start the main characters wishes make no sense and are very stupid and also very random. To add the main character feels bland and it makes the story boring to read. Also it feels like you are shoving random scenarios into this fiction like the bullying of the mom for no reason and how Cynthia acts like a complete child that doesn’t fit her character in the show. And also the ho oh part was very forced as well that it seems a 7 year old child was writing this. The start was ok but it’s just a downward slope to the point of gotten to it.The main thing holding this back is how you are showing the characters and that needs to be fixed because it’s hard to read these conversations for enjoyment which is what fan fictions are about
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The paragraph is so big, grammar is decent, but still have errors along the line. A lot of punctuation mistakes, and plot is too boring I could not get through chapter fourteen and here I am, about to drop another fanfic. It's the same old cliche and the guy goes to the world of Pokemon type of novel. Please, add a twist aside from Covid-19, and character design? Little to no descriptions about the characters at all. Dialogues are simply boring, and the pace is too slow.
This has a great start so far and I’m really enjoying this! This book has a great update time and really has me wanting more! Overall great story and great writing structure would definitely recommend this to others!
If you wanted to make original an creature why did you go to Pokemon? There are literally hundreds of them and you chose to make one of your own?