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Del Is a teenage boy of humble birth from Earth. He is attending the last year of his high school until a magical circle transported the whole class into another world. He is the weakest among the other students that were summoned to another world. It resulted in him being banished from the heroes' party.
Consequently, he has to survive on his own in another world which he has no idea about. He only survived by doing low-level quests and cheap assignments. After his first time leveling up, he gained a new ability [Modern Weapon Summoning System], a system that can make any modern armaments with limitations.
The new ability gives Del an edge over his opponent. However, the limitations of the system are severe. Some of the weapons are even downright useless. In this world of magic, even the ability to make an assault rifle can’t protect him from those who wish him to disappear.
Can he survive while developing his new ability or will he end up six feet below the ground?
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Update Rate = 7 Chapters/ Week
Bonus Chapter for:
200 Powerstones = 1 Chapter
400 Powerstones = 2 Chapter
600 Powerstones = 3 Chapter
800 Powerstones = 4 Chapter
1000 Powerstones = 5 Chapter
1200 Powerstones = 6 Chapter
1400 Powerstones = 7 Chapter
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เขียนรีวิวIt's pretty good, but it's not "Modern Weapon Summoning System" but "Modern Weapon Shop System"
After 180 chapters, I'm dropping this novel. I made the mistake of buying a 100 chapter unlock, because 30 of those chapters were duplicates. The authors method of frequent updates is to simply release older chapters randomly, scamming money from people. If you decide to read, only unlock single chapters.
4 stars for me. Just read 10 chapters, I wish to read a little bit more but I find a point in the novel where I'm sure many people would drop it. Let's go to the facts; - MC characters is... awful, it's clear that he was a childish and incapable person previously. He has no ambition whatsoever and is very impulsive in his behavior. He doesn't reflect upon his actions nor think about his future. All in all, is quite distateful as a main character, for me he seemed like a random character in a book who died later on. -World building: In this aspect I can say that is well written, although there's nothing crazy, it fits quite well and you don't have a hard time imagining it. Pretty solid. -Interactions: This is a point where I think that while it's not bad, it can improve much more. It's okay but seemed somewhat lacking. There's also little monologues or other tools that could tell us what the MC and other characters think about their situations. All in all, it could clearly improve. -System?: Yes, there's a question mark there, because I keep wondering myself in these 10 chapters, is that really a system? It feels more like a shop. Story wise, i see a clear problem with the novel, which is, the main character. There's no signs or whatsoever that he could improve, there's no goals and anything like that in these chapters that could give you the hope to keep reading it. There's also another point I wish to say this early, is quite simple to see how the author didn't wished to point out in the development of some business or something for the MC, I'm aware this isn't a kingdom building novel, whoever, knowing how his system function, is clearly somewhat a cheat if he could gain quite amount of money, which would ease out his problems. But since this would eliminate the drama and plot for the author, since there would be little to no struggle for the MC, there's no words nor indication from the MC in that aspect. Like a said, 4 stars novel, which is quite good in web novel standard. Just hope for the Main character personality to improve since it makes harder for me to keep reading it. Wish you good luck and success author.
The story started out fine, but then about halfway in they leave the medieval setting and travel to WW2, which was a radical difference from the beginning. Eventually most of the chapters are just repeats. And then some weird stuff about their parents and dying and the story goes silent, and all the chapters named [updated later] and not updated. Also during that halfway plot the whole revenge against his team who betrayed him just dissapears. I don't find it makes sense to go with a WW2 setting halfway through.
as I said before this is the updated review. good book for some people but not for me, Mc is a little beta (forgot the word I have in my mind) and didn't like NPCs character, if you don't mind Mc having weak personality (didn't find the right words for the description of Mc, this is the nearest description I could write) this book is good for u. liked author's previous work (portable something) and liked this novel's idea. good work author 👍
not a fun of beta MC stupid and even though the tags is not enough to cought my Interest and felt bored just looking at it since I'm harem and romance fan, I grit my teeth just so I can see something new since the title is a bit interesting but the MC's stupid personality turn me off . just nahhhh🤮🤮🤮🤮🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
I give five stars because I like this novel. So far the story development is going well. Starting from the characters, world development, plot, etc. I like it plus the story concept that is rarely found "modern weapons vs fantasy". well.. you know it's hard to find a story like that even if there is it's just an abandoned story. okay enough for the review continue the story max
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์So I read until it was no longer free for a reference point. Didnt see any kingdom building up to that point and Del as a character didnt really grow just got money to buy gear. I would imagine going through enough trauma would change his character in some way. Grammar needs improvements. Like saying she when talking about cassander and other minor errors. Also have not seen why stat points matter when he just uses a firearm. Wish you luck with your story
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์No wonder it's dropped, MC character is so suck.. .plot is so forced and goes nowhere, hahahaha suck author
i don't quite understand how modern weapons which pack a punch more than swords cannot kill your average bandit (he was shot in the eye mind you) while a dull cheap sword can do so and i'd have liked to see MC growing personality wise and his system is more like a merchant business rather than a system which will allow the Host to grow stronger and face challenges its not rewarding
The MC is too dumb, he lived in Earth who had a lot of technology and dont know anything about them. I would prefer a MC with knowledge about Engineering, Science and Computation.
Is the Autor taking us for fools ? I made the mistake to unlock all chapters in batch, and so far .. after the chapter 130, almost every chapter are in double. So i paid for more than 80 chapter where half are not even true .. How about a refund ? It's sad, because the story was good.
While the story is good, when I watch maybe more than 100-130 chapters, I kinda felt bored when they are in a WW2 situation which I felt I'm loosing my interest in the book and also author you really need to name your latest chapters, it is one of the reason why I'm starting to loose my interest
I like the story a bit although there are inconsistencies in the story the characters aren't bad but they could use some the only real big issue that I have with the story are the repeating of chapter later on that's the only big issue I have come across. Minor issue being that it doesn't feel like the MC is really having developed as a character in the story. Still I would come back to read this story at a later date and hope these issues get fixed.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์This should be called War-Crime summoning System sis finds he can summon nukes and instantly wants to drop a small sun on a country just to kill just two guys and their underlings
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์I LIKE IT 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After reading the synopsis, I instantly wonder how the story would go. If Den would be able to survive in the new world especially with his low status, or if he wouldn’t make it and will just die helplessly. The first chapters were written well, there were no doubts about that. The story develops at a comfortable speed with good insight on motivations and goals that keeps the whole book entertaining to read. Overall, I would say that the writing quality, update frequency, story development, characters were excellent. The world-building was also done very well, and I really enjoy how the story evolves. I truly hope that this book will do well. Good luck to you, Author.