Micheal Hale

LV 4

NTR_is_trash

Not absolutely terrible but this story reads like a how a 4 year old would retell a story to you. No substance and no stops just a ton of stuff happening back to back.

LV 4

Sora_Matsukaze

Well... This story leaves a lot to be desired, the rapid character development and illogical things happening. That's why I consider it a waste of time to read this story, but I respect those who like it. See you later~.

LV 6

Scientistx

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LV 5

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LV 4

Gd_Sys

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LV 2

tykee554

i like this my good sir or mam I'm trying to write also but its really hard so I be positive and keep pushing man you got this yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

LV 4

ItIswhatItIs

We want more We desire more We need more We shall have more And you shall be the one to have the honour of providing us with what we need.