MHA Dungeon Master

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novalista

Like other authors, I give five stars to boost the rating of this story. Instead of making fun of myself here, I hope you all use this review comment section to provide critiques or suggestions related to the story. Thank you also for reading my silly tale.

LV 5

Professor_Light

The title should be Dungeon Challenger not Dungeon Master, The MC have a quirk that can create dungeons for him to challange not for him to manage. aside from that everything is good

LV 4

Daotianshen

I think the title is kinda misleading because it said dungeon master when he is not the one creating the dungeons. And he only use this dungeons to level up and acquire quirks, not create them to be against the heroes for them to clear his dungeons.

LV 2

_Pochitalover_

3 stars, the author extended the arc of the sports festival too much, I understand that the author wants to explore the characters' personalities and create interactions, but almost 20 chapters is way overkill. Also the main character's personality feels very robotic, as if he was an NPC with predetermined dialogues, which I find very disappointing when you realize that there are 20 chapters trying to shape his personality. In general to this kind of fanfic I give 2 or 1 stars, but it has decent spelling and grammar, along with an interesting concept. But it remains just that, a concept, because the author takes more than 20 chapters to properly explore the main theme of the story. In conclusion: a very slow pace, to the point of being overwhelming even, the character development leaves much to be desired if you take into account that the introduction lasts 20 CHAPTERS! And that the main appeal of the story is left aside in favor of somewhat stilted interactions. If you're a SoL fan you might like it, other than that it's a fanfic saturated with a lot of irrelevant dialogue and focusing on many characters at once.

When will this arc end, and the protagonist finally get to showcase their abilities as a Dungeon Master, fully revealing his powers and skills?

LV 3

Puput_Novel_4427

This fanfic is very good continue to update

LV 1

DaoistPfd13C

Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.

LV 4

ZombieSirGatoREAD

The beginning is suuuuuuuuuper slow but so far it has been pretty good. The protag is currently six so hopefully he’ll be older by chapter 50 (god I hope so…)

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Bertinho_Gamer

the sheer amount of fillers and unnecessary chapters in this novel is disgusting

LV 4

KaratePepe

The story so far is pretty good, I give it only four stars because it's clearly either AI written or AI assisted.

This novel holds much promise, I enjoy it, so please keep the chapters coming and don't stop updating!

LV 1

PinkSnake

Good luck! I took a look, and it seems interesting. It's rare for fanfic writers to actually finish their stories, but I think that's important. Someday, I want to try writing one too. I hope it goes really well for you!

The story is really good, please don't stop writing it!

Is the plot of this story going to lead towards a harem, where the main character has multiple love interests??????????????????? [img=strong]

The plot of this story has really captivated me. Please ensure that you continue developing it until its completion for the satisfaction of your readers.

LV 3

ConstantConfusion

its great so far but you don't give much info on the Mcs power you mostly just glided over that and it feels a little too fast paced but besides that its fine

LV 4

xAr4m1s

Ojala existiera una opcion para bloquear novelas o a autores especifos, sin ofender

LV 2

BinEinWurm

2.6 ✨

LV 15

Blake_Langton

Chapter 25. Nothing else needs to be said.