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always felt like denki's quirk was wasted, elctrokenesis has so much potential. so I thought it would be cool to explore a more mature and focused, as well as obviously smarter, Denki learning how to use his quirk properly to become the badass he deserves to be.
never written any fanfiction before so any constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated please
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Well I can see the author is cooking something with a mysterious past trauma or something.And on top of that a really good view of the powers because some are based on real scientific facts(while obviously it's impossible to interact so precisely on ions) On that you could see what you can do with the meissner effect(Google the effect and see what you can do).So to the question is.Is it a Harem?(please no)
it makes me laugh that the author didn't even investigate the abilities of the guy he uses as MC, with this we can see that the story won't be much.
Looks very interesting so far, this Kaminari seems like he’s becoming a MHA version of Cole MacGrath from Infamous, which should allow for a good deal of flexibility with his Elextrokinesis and having his power path and equipment laid out. Hopefully there won’t be too much trauma in his past if there is any, I just don’t care for it. Either way a great start and I can’t wait for more!