Metallic System

LV 11

Dark19

Here is the Author, just to rate my work and tell you that if you have any opinion on how to improve the characters just leave it in the comments. I will do a daily chapter or more if I can.

LV 4

Saint_Hubris

look similar to "my touch corps system" or at least the skill and System but the story look completely different even though it's in the same first world (hotd) the mc have a different personality and the story start way before the zombie apocalypse. there's a few grammatical error and the author sometimes get the gender wrong (using she/her for a male and he/his for a female). the story look good so far so keep up the good work.

LV 12

Silver_Epsilon

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LV 4

LUCIFER_20

Interesting Story so far ............................................................................................................................................................

LV 5

jeanpierregerardo

interesing history. *******************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

LV 3

12HCL

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