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so far (up to chapter 8) the story is good enough that i added it in my collection. there are some out of order parts but i like how the writer managed to rap it up in later chapters. the changed pov was out of expectation but appreciated its still raw so author pls work more on realistic parts of the story not every part of it needs to be moral lessons its a personal opinion but i would like to have a slow story line with more characters mixed in have multiple pov's (noy necessary all of it about love and friends) develope your background you have a character that due to his early hard life and depression he might not know about all the history of the world he is in and he also could be under surveillance of shield and later finds about it he doesnt need to go to space like in 20 chapters if you have time and want to develope it more i advise some changes to mcu and more focus on comics and stuff like that he doesnt need to be omnipotent marvel have enough heros to support every crisis but you could just fit him in between develope him more you didnt specifi his exact power level so you could move around it last word you have good penmanship have good imagination (i really like how you made him a gentle person without any cringe there ) i hope to see more of this story p.s. read "worm" if you have time good story can influence your stor in a good way p.s also more of conner's daily life would be appreciated like (i can easily see a 100+ chapter story here worth reading good luck)
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Disappointed With his weakness he should learn to be humble instead he directly goes to Tony to sell something that he shouldn't have. Not only he is in the rader his parents as well Also how much will you try to nerf him His intelligence is so many much that I his idiocy makes it worse
This is actually good. we will be waiting for more chapters can't wait to see it happen .
This is really good. I Hope you Continue .............. .............................................................................................................................
I loved the story, and how you developed Clark's heart in your character, conveying the hope he gives
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Couldn’t make it past chapter two. The grammar is readable but still quite bad and slightly unpleasant. The biggest thing I cannot get past is how stupid the premise of the MC bring a cripple is. Essentially, the ROB decided to cripple him because he somehow thinks making him have a difficult and deprived life will make him use the power for good once he gets it? Like hello? This is so many villains origin story: downtrodden person who is bitter gets power and then lashes out and goes for revenge. Worst of all the MC thanks the being for making him live like a cripple because he thinks he would’ve gone full Chinese style arrogant moron if he was given the powers from the start. Thus, i csnnot stand the MC or the way the author thinks. Lastly, is kryptonian power is drastically nerfed and I find that to be a bit of a bait and switch on the authors part considering the title and cover image. Anyway, maybe the story gets decent further on but I could not get past the above.