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John, a 19-year-old teenager, has spent his entire life paralyzed. Despite his physical limitations, John has never succumbed to depression or unhappiness. However, his life takes a drastic turn when his mother, overwhelmed with emotion, utters words that cut deep into John's heart: "Why don't you just die, John?"

The pain and fear that follow are foreign emotions for John. In a desperate plea, he prays to God, "Please kill me." But, in a shocking turn of events, God responds – and John's life is forever altered.


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yes it’s me lol, I just came to say that this book is not a translation , it is my book , I spent time and effort making it and I hope you guys enjoy it as much as I did , now yes the synopsis is very short but never forget, small packages come in big explosions ,dang no I think it’s the other way around lol,

now I got inspired by two of my favourite fanfics [I Am in Marvel with Unlimited Cards] and
[Marvel: The Gene Collector] ,like I said this is purely original and yes ,this is a fanfic meaning I don’t own most of the characters in the novel besides the MC[main character]
this story is made to be r18 so those who are under the age of 18 are not advanced to read this as it might contain strong scenes and more , viewer discretion is advised
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[THIS IS A WARNING,I DO NOT GIVE PERMISSION TO ANYONE FOR TRANSLATION , OR COPYRIGHT, IF U ARE FOUND OF DOING THIS WITH MY WORK , I WILL TAKE LEGAL ACTION ,THIS IS NOT A THREAT, IT IS A WARNING] , and if you are looking for permission, simply leave a comment and I will reply to you , but if I don’t , it means it is a rejection

[I DONT OWN THE PICTURE SHOWN FOR THE NOVEL , IT JUST REPRESENTS WHAT I MADE THE CHARACTER LOOK LIKE , JF U WANT IT REMOVED, SIMPLY ASK AND I WILL DO SO ]

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UnenlightenedOne

suing someone for reposting or translating your fanfic?😂 good luck on that. i might be tempted to repost your fanfic and post the translated version using google just to mess with you.

2mth
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Error000000

Honestly I did expect this much lol 🤣 Like bro u have a reputation, I love all your work bro this includes the other book u are also working on , so when u said u are doing a fanfic I was really surprised and happy, the book is obviously amazing as it has a good element of emotion and depth, lol this book also starts with a tragic death , just like the last book of yours u put a lot of emotions into the character like u are the character himself 😮‍💨 it’s truly amazing and a breath of fresh air , u should consider making an actual full book , but it’s cool , anyone who is reading the comments before going into the book , although I have only read 10 chapters i can truly say from the author previous book that it’s going to be amazing and I can’t wait to see how it turns out lol 😭

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2mth
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DUSK_IS_ME

This is my second review as the author and I got some spoilers for u 🥴not that much just a little 🤏 Let’s talk about the character .yes his gonna be overpowered 😮‍💨 .Yes his gonna be a mutant .Yes his gonna have a system .Yes his system doesn’t have any form of consciousness,it’s just a catalyst .yes he is a transmigrator .yes he gets memories of the body .yes he is rich .yes he is very good looking{he is like GOJO with white eyes .yes he is brutal .yes he is not mentally stable .yes he is not a psychopath .yes he will have a tragic death .yes he is male .yes he is transmigrated to 1945 .yes he goes to school with Charles Xavier .yes he can take abilities .yes he can upgrade abilities .yes he is intelligent .yes ,yes ,yes he is all the good things mixed in one lol Although this review might make you think that the character is too forced or too perfect, Nope u wrong , DONT believe me 🥴read the first two chapters lol

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2mth
ดู 5 การตอบกลับ
Error000000

3rd review so far and the story is going good , love how human the character seems , love how he takes a bit of time before completely adopting to the new world he is now in , yes bro seems to be overpowered no way around it lol , 😂 chapter 15 and his already facing off with the bold women 🤏🏿 that’s a hint lol , I’m not gonna spoil anything, love how cool the chapter acts 😂yea I just love him man , reminds me of the alternate version of me lol . The story’s pace is very good , love how the conversation are not cringe and always there if necessary

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2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Error000000

13 chapters in and again I have to say , this book is getting better and better, love the character and how he doesn’t easily forget his passed like some characters of some novels , love the ways he acts for now , love how real he feels and yes for now it’s good so it’s still a 5 star for me , I don’t see any mistakes when it comes to pronunciation or sentences, easy to understand and very interactive , it doesn’t make me wanna fall asleep , and I love the aspect of mixing both mutants and the marvel superhero’s into one world it has too much potential 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 It’s really good

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2mth
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SPHYN_X
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Great start looking forward to future chapters!!!

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2mth
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Zkopa_
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Pretty great start. I like that Mc doesn't seem to be a dumb guy. First chapters were a little too short for my liking, but like you stated it becomes better. Keep up the good work.

2mth
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Daoist866791

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

2mth
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DUSK_IS_ME

Now here is my comment on possible soon to be many , first I put a lot of work into this , in my perspective I’m going to make it one of the best fanfics that will ever be made 🥴I mean everyone has a dream right , and now this is me , this is the best webnovel in the world , well obviously after solo levelling lol now this isn’t that much of a comment but let me just tell u , read the first 3 chapters, and I promise u probably won’t be disappointed 🥰

2mth
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DUSK_IS_ME

Now here is my comment on possible soon to be many , first I put a lot of work into this , in my perspective I’m going to make it one of the best fanfics that will ever be made 🥴I mean everyone has a dream right , and now this is me , this is the best webnovel in the world , well obviously after solo levelling lol now this isn’t that much of a comment but let me just tell u , read the first 3 chapters, and I promise u probably won’t be disappointed 🥰

2mth
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Randomdude42

This is decent and is looking pretty good but the author needs to explain the abilities he copies from other more cause I just know some people will rage about that in the future other than that this is pretty good.

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