Mamori Tai

LV 1

LucienNg

5 stars, all the way. Now, usually, this type of novel isnt my cup of tea. Not because I hate it, but because how exaggerated some authors made it to be. The topic is highly sensitive, so it takes an author care and ACTUAL research to make this not clunky. However, this book is not bad at all. I did not expect do stumble across something like this. Your writing is well polished despite not having an editor, the pacing and plot was on spot as well. It was not a full-of-action book, but a rather deep and soft one. It also seemed like you have planned your book well, which gave your every chapter a sense of purpose that contributed towards the future end. Overall, I like how the story progress. Please keep up the good work :).

LV 2

iam_adh

I like how soft the story is, presumably. I also like the real life mental issues are fetishized and the author seemed to put much work into their project. There are some typos here and there and the realistic effect is a bit complicated to explain. However, this is a good book so far. and I expect good things in the future!

LV 2

AxlSLL

"守りたい" I want to protect you. It's very well-received that the grammar and punctuation are good in this work, something very lacking in most titles here. The colorful cast of characters brings lots of personality to the work and the setting. It's engaging to read what they're up to. It's clear that the author did his research on various of the themes the story deals with. Highly recommended, keep up author! 日本語を習ったほうがいいね！

LV 2

CREATIVE_SPACE

Well, I agree that it's too early to drop a review but I see the potential of the author. First chapter is well described and each character is depicted uniquely. The dialogues are well written. Hoping to read more and might drop another review after few more chapters.

LV 2

Idyllic_Scribe

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LV 13

Stormzz

For the most part, the writing is good. One major problem: You should start a new paragraph whenever a new character speaks. Often it can be a little hard to figure out who's talking. Pacing is good, characters are good.

LV 4

Ultimatedaywriter

Its a good story about drama and secrets being revealed. If your into high school angst and learning about in depth characters this is the right story for you.

LV 11

Rayne_Rue

Love this book keep it up Author, great work, The characters are great Hisoki keep it up Author 💯good job Author love the plot as well, Will continue to read this book.

LV 2

Idyllic_Scribe

Shameless author ik. Honestly, this book is my first ever novel, and added on the amount of characters in the book, it was hard creating a world. However, I think I might have managed to do such a thing. honestly, if it wasn't for readers, I don't think I would be continuing writing. So thank you!

LV 3

Le_Krackeen

The characters are all well written, even though sometimes it is a bit difficult to know who does what, and a few typos here and there but that didn't bother me too much. I felt a dramatic atmosphere during my reading, I don't know if it was intended, but if it is, well done! Usually I'm not really into that kind of story, but I'll keep reading this one. Keep up the good work!