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บท 14: Properly Handling Criminals

It was a lovely first day of work for Madara, he spent his whole day sitting under the shade drinking expensive cold drinks and watching grown men beating the shit out of one another until sunset.

The only disappointment was that he couldn't tie people upside down on the columns as he wanted, Mr. Beifong intervened and prevented it from happening, 'what a party pooper' so he just tied them regularly with his wires without any issue, they were out cold after all.

But Madara was actually shocked by Lei's endurance and strength, it was like he was fighting against the world on his own and outlasted everyone even though he could barely walk back home. 'It seems I underestimated you Jackie, you just earned my respect today.'

He could feel a cold breeze passing through him as he walked towards a secluded location right outside the Beifong estate, the warm setting sun illuminated the roofs of Gao Ling like jewels, it was a beautiful city.

Walking furter from the estate he saw a huge hollow mountain. 'This wasn't here when I arrived… it seems Lao called some earthbenders to build me a training area, what a thoughtful bastard.'

He walked through huge metal gates and pulled a lever nearby that closed them, taking his robes until he was only left with his pants on, he found some shelves and made good use of them, walking towards the main area he found a place very similar to the Beifong estate training area, a large arena that looked a lot like the ones in Dragon Ball tournaments.

"It seems that everything a Beifong does needs to be grand… is he compensating for something?" snorting he swaggered his way to the center and sat down.

"My chi pool stopped increasing after I became 10, it seems that in this world there's only a very tight timeframe in which someone's chi pool keeps expanding naturally, that explains a lot about a lot of things…" he took a deep breath.

"My sharingan only activated that night because I can assume that was the moment that my chii pool stopped increasing, it was 15 days ago… which means that I turned 10 exactly 15 days ago, I now know my biological birthday, although I don't know which day is today because I never cared but I can ask for information after this training."

Focusing on his hands in front of one another ahead of his chest, he willed it and a flame appeared, he narrowed his eyes and increased his concentration "Now c'mon, lets try to achieve that beautiful blue fire…"

Minutes became hours and he failed and failed in achieving the blue fire, his first theory was that Azula spent twice or thrice the amount of chi to intensify her flames and he tried just that, but that only made the flame go bigger, he was lacking something. Even the best firebending method he got didn't teach him the fire because the amount of chi required for the blue flames was absurd, he wonders how many before Azula could do it, he never heard of any Avatar doing it so it must be a very rare trait to have a huge chi pool.

"I will work around that, my plan is to spend my next year coming here every day after work to master firebending entirely, then go back to the Southern Air Temple to fetch my gunbai and once I'm back here… heh." he grinned "It will be lightning time baby..."

From that day on he kept the same regime, he woke up at dawn he trained the soldiers until they could barely walk before sending them back home, many decided to quit but most of them stayed, which shocked Madara a bit, his training was borderline torture but those blokes endured it without crying, well at least in front of him.

During this time, he also spent quite some time with little Toph, who's already displaying her rebel personality when alone with Madara.

"This place sucks!" a childish female shout echoed through the little gazebo in the middle of a huge koi pond.

"It's not that bad little midget, I had to live on fruits and birds for a whole year… and after that I had to survive in the wilds for half a year, hiding in the Foggy Swamp eating things you don't want to know to satisfy my hunger." Said a less childish male voice in a soothing tone.

Yes, these were Toph and Madara having one of their 'Secret Meetings' during the evenings, it needs quotes because Madara was upfront with Lao, who was actually very open and receptive about the idea, and even went a step further and prevented his wife from discovering, after spending quite some time with Madara he was already regretting certain choices in life, well at least now he might not end up like a whipped simp.

"It's not fair! They treat me like I'm a porcelain doll just because I'm blind!" complained little Toph.

"Well, you indeed are blind but I do disagree with how they treat you, well at least how your mother treats you." Said Madara, he was trying to make Toph not hate her father like in canon, he might be a pretentious bastard but he was lovable pretentious bastard.

"Only you understand me Madara, I don't know how I would've endured this without you around" she said sulking.

That triggered a red alarm inside his brain, if he stays around for too long Toph might not try to run away, and if she doesn't…. she won't be able to learn earthbending from the badgermoles… 'luckily my trip towards the Potala Mountains will give her the push to run away from home, if 2 weeks is not enough, I can only rush to the desert and take my two leaves back-to-back so she can follow her canon route.'

"It's not hard to understand you, or do you think I can't see your smirk when I make grown men cry" he asked while chuckling.

Toph grinned "That's how it needs to be done, you beat the shit out of them and one day I will do the same!"

Madara patted her head gently "Yes, make me proud little midget".

But she slapped his hand "Don't pat my head I'm not a deer dog!" she pouted and crossed her arms.

"Aye, Aye, whatever you say" he said softly while patting her head once again, this time she didn't stop him.

After that night Madara kept his part of the bargain, he trained soldiers daily, took no day offs and trained on his own, during his stay in the Beifong estate he stopped two abduction operations against little Toph and one assassination attempt on Lao Beifong's life, which earned him the full trust of the Patriarch of the Beifong family, well except the big head, she still disliked him very much.

After a year of work Madara was walking towards the gates, his crew was waiting for him, and even Lao himself showed up to see him off with Little Toph, who was doing her hardest to not cry at this point, tough earthbender or not, Madara became her big brother and she didn't want him gone, she would feel lonely and trapped again.

"Be safe Madara" said Lao, since the assassination attempt, he became way more casual with Madara and started calling him by his first name like friends "And come back soon, little Toph will miss you dearly"

Madara chuckled "yeah I will miss this little midget too" he looked at her for a bit, seeing her pouting but doing her best to keep her princess persona, before turning to Lao "As for you Mr. Beifong, take care of your health."

Lao shook his head "You know you can call me Lao at this point, don't you?"

Ponting to the servants nearby, Madara replied "Yes but the word would spread and a certain someone would hate me even more."

"hahahaha" Lao let out an awkward laugh.

Toph walked forward like a princess and gave him a signal, to which he understood and lowered his head, they had their own signal language at this point, every time Toph wanted to say something to him, something that would break her princess persona in public, she would use certain signals.

"If you don't come back, I will beat the crap out of you the next time I see you!" she whispered in a way that only he could hear, after that she elegantly walked back to her position by Lao.

Madara grinned and stood up "Very well, it shouldn't take long, two weeks give or take, don't go dying on me Mr. Beifong, you still have 4 years of Gold Taels to pay me."

Lao just grinned back.

And like that they parted temporarily, well that was until a shout came from behind.

"WAIT! MR. UCHIHA WAIT!"

Everyone turned back to see a man in elegant clothes running towards them.

"Jackie? What the hell are you doing here?" Asked Madara confused.

"I'm going with you sir! I'm your assistant, its my job to help you!" He said firmly.

Looking at Lao and seeing him smiling and nodding Madara could only sigh.

"You better not slow me down, come… you will be carrying my luggage" he tossed his backpack to Lei.

"Yes Sir!" Lei caught it and walked towards the rest of the crew, he changed since he started his daily exercise with the guards under Madara's cruel torture, at first, he hated it, he barely could enjoy his wife and was in constant pain, but after the first six months? His body became tough and his six-pack was at full display, his body became so well defined that his wife attacked him at nights and displayed many new kinks that he never knew! From that day forward he vowed to always follow Madara with all his heart.

After travelling for half week towards the nearest port-city, they all entered the Beifong owned boat, a huge flying boar on the sails that scared people away, no one wanted to fuck with the Beifongs, one word, one bounty, and they would be hunted for life, even by their close relatives! Money had THAT much power.

The trip was actually very comfortable, even the ship was like a small palace stocked to the brim with luxury food and drinks, damn he is being spoiled rotten here.

"PIRATE SHIP AHEAD!"

That interrupted Madara's meditation, his eyes slowly opened displaying his blood red sharingan, he stood up and walked out of his cabin with slow steps and a neutral expression on his face.

Everyone that saw him made way for him, those eyes were scary!

"S-sir they are coming for us! These pirates don't care about the Beifong Family! We should prepare for battle or for escape, give us the order, Sir."

Pirates were different from the mainland bandits, there's no way to escape through the water, even for a waterbender since they were quite far from the mainland, and they can just erase all the witnesses, the Beifongs would be furious but they wouldn't have anyone to target, storms were very common on the open seas afterall.

Madara reached bow of the ship and stood on top of the railings, his black robes and long spiky black hair moving with the wind. "Keep current course, I will handle this."

Gulp.

Madara watched the pirate ship getting closer and closer with a demonic grin forming on his lips 'I always wanted to do this…'

He formed the Horse hand sign with both hands in front his chest, took a deep breath and said out loud.

"Katon: Gouka Mekkyaku!"

And just like that the world was set aflame.


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Good evening you beautiful sausages, im here to deliver another chapter. This time i won't be saying anything negative or anything like that, you guys are awesome, thank you for your ratings and support!

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บท 15: Inferno

A group of pirates that usually raided specific routes between the Fire Nation and Earth Kingdom decided to relocate their usual route due to the recent Fire Navy moving east, they couldn't keep their operation for a while so they had to go south.

The captain was a scarred woman with a long black jacket, she had tanned skin and dark brown hair to complement her one blind eye, which had a long scar, and part of her partially burned scalp on the right side of her head, which makes her have a rather viking-ish hairstyle.

She had a vicious air around her, wearing a crop top under her long coat that exposed her scarred yet well defined abs, long puffy beige pants and dark brown long boots. She was tall for a woman but anyone could see that she would've been a beauty if it wasn't for her damaged body considering how beautiful her cyan blue eye was.

"Captain, we spotted a ship starboard side!" said one of her henchmen offering her the spyglasses.

Taking the item, she turned towards the location "Aren't those sails from those rich fuckers from the Earth Kingdom?" she said as she looked at the sails of the ship.

"Aye captain, they are filthy rich! After plundering their ship we can retire for months!" Said her first mate, a short stout man with a long dirty beard and a braided skullet hairstyle.

"Are you fucking retarded?! They will chase us down if we attack!" Said one of the crew members that worked on the sails.

"Shut up scrub, no one asked you" Said the first mate.

The woman kept staring at the ship, attack or not attack? She had a bad feeling about this, both sides one had one ship and Beifongs had the money to hire strong protection…

'And they probably already spotted us… that can ruin our plans to plunder the south in secret until those Fire Nation bastards clear our waters…' she snorted "Caught between the devil and the deep blue sea, eh?"

Everyone was silently waiting for the captain's decision.

She smirked sadistically and shouted "Bottom's up ye seadogs, we are takin her home!"

""YEEEEEEEEEEEEAH"" everyone shouted and ran to their places

"All hands on deck, batten down the hatches!" Shouted the first mate.

The ship slowly turned towards their target and started moving full speed.

The captain walked towards the bow of the ship and stared at their prey with expectant eyes, a Beifong ship was a motherload to any pirate, she may be afraid of consequences but the sea is their realm, they could always erase all witnesses and no one would ever know.

She kept staring at the other ship until she saw someone stepping on the top of the bow's railings, she focused her spy glass and saw a young boy with long black hair and black and red robes that looked a bit too fancy for some common servant to wear, but it was when she focused on his eyes that her heart skipped a beat.

Those blood red eyes staring directly at her from so far away, she could see him perfectly due to the spyglass, but why is she feeling like he can see perfectly as well without even needing one?

Seeing him making some strange hand sign she was confused, is that the rich way to sign for peace or something?

One second later the world turned red, she couldn't even describe it because the term "massive" didn't sound accurate enough

A gigantic wave of fire was launched on their direction, devouring sea water like a hungry beast and leaving a huge cloud of vapor behind, it approached them at high speed, roaring like an angry stampede wanting to trample everything in its way.

ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAR.

She felt insignificant in front of such display of power, quickly turning around she dashed towards the cabin while shouting in panic as she ran. "BRACE YE SELVES!"

The sails burned before the wave even got there, it was so hot that people were sweating from both dread and heat way before the wave reached them, even the captain's skin started boiling while running as that disaster came closer and closer.

All the greed and lust for gold disappeared in a sea of fire.

On the opposite ship the situation wasn't so different, every crew member stared wide eyed at the massive wave of fire that roared towards the pirates, this absurd level of power wasn't something they ever saw or even hear about it!

Some kept staring at the fire absentminded, some stared at the young boy in black and red wondering if he is an ancient dragon in disguise, Jackie on the other hand looked up, wondering if Sozin's comet had returned.

After the wave devoured the ship, it slowly faded away, leaving behind a thick cloud of vapor everywhere, the pirate captain was on her knees inside the captain cabin, with smoke coming out of her entire body, her jacket was half burned to cinders her pants were devoured and now they could barely cover up to her thighs, her boots and top were still intact but that was because of the boot's materials and because the jacket took most of the damage head on.

She breathed heavily and tried her best to not lose consciousness here, she used every amount of chi she had to pull the water out of the ocean and create a barrier around her, it wasn't a perfect barrier she didn't have enough time to make one of those, she had to compensate the sloppiness with chi and that costed her dearly, she was barely awake.

"Cough, Cough" she heard her first mate's coughing outside

"Kur…A…Are Ye Still With me?" she spoke as loud as she could, taking deep breaths between words since she was beyond exhausted right now, her voice turned raspy due to the feeling of dehydration.

"Ca….ca..captain…" a weak voice reached her ears and she mustered her whole strength to walk outside the cabin, what she saw brought her despair, fear and sadness.

Corpses with boiled skin everywhere, the ship charred like charcoal, falling apart, a slightly bigger wave would break the hull.

"…Cap…captain…" the voice again! She hurried and looked around and spotted her first mate completely burned, massive lumps of ruined flesh all over his body, there's no way to save him, it's just a matter of time now.

".. We.. s..shoud..ve… left…" were his last words.

He nodded and lowed her head "Aye…we should've..." Although sad she was a pirate, there was no romance between crewmates here, those who fell behind stayed behind. What made her like this was another thing, her first mate, just like her, was a waterbender, and she didn't have any doubt that he used his skills to protect himself with water, but even doing that he ended up like this… 'if I didn't reach the cabin in time… ' she could only gulp at that thought.

Her thoughts were interrupted by a childish male voice.

"Oh, so there are survivors after all…"

Turning her head towards the source of the voice, her one good eye captured the sight of the same young man from the spyglass, standing there on top of the charred deck with an indifferent gaze, his red eyes glowing through the fog.

"How should I call you?" he asked.

"K…Kaliya" She answered, she wasn't stuttering or anything like that, she was just that tired.

"Very well Kaliya, from now on your residence will be inside our brig, I have some questions for you if you don't mind."

"Aye..." was all she could say before her world turned black and she passed out.

The rest of the crew jumped onto the charred ship and started looking around, paper and other fragile items were long gone, but gold and precious metals obviously endured the flames, they looted everything they found under Madara's orders, good paycheck or not, no one would throw away some extra income that just falls on your lap like that.

Kaliya was first sent to a cabin to be treated, Madara needed her alive to get some information, he hasn't travelled across the four nations yet so any information would be welcomed, it took a whole day to complete Kaliya's treatment, once she woke up, she was escorted to the brig, she didn't complain or anything, just followed instructions.

During those 24 hours the crew was silent, especially around Madara.

Most of them, excluding the few handling the ship and medics aboard, were trained under Madara's torture and they knew Madara was no joke when it came to martial arts, his firebending was also an open secret at this point, although one talked about it everyone knew, but no one ever saw him using it before, today was the first time… and no one would be able to forget it.

Kaliya was resting, sitting on the ground and leaning her back against the metal bars, waiting for whatever it was to come, having captured many prisoners before she knew of her possible outcomes, but having a possibility of life was still better than having certainty of death.

She heard light footsteps walking down the stairs, coming towards her. She slowly turned her head and her eye captured the same boy again, this time his eyes were pitch black though, that made her rather curious, she never heard of such a skill.

"So, Kaliya, are you enjoying your stay?" asked the boy.

"Ye rich folk brigs are better than me ol' cabin" she chuckled in response.

Madara chuckled in response "I can't deny that, these people are rather … excessive…"

"These people? Aren't ye one of them? Judging by ye clothes…."

Madara shrugged "They pay me, they house me, they outfit me and they feed me… what can I say?"

She laughed "Ye live the life of a king"

He laughed as well "I can't deny that either."

After that a brief moment of silence she spoke first.

"So.. what ye wanna to know?"

"Oh?"

"Don't play dumb with me, I know ye left me alive for a purpose, me gold and me ship are gone, so the only reason I am treated and alive is because ye need something i might know."

"You are rather smart for a pirate."

"And how do ye think I became a captain in the first place? by riding on a sea of cocks?" she snorted and spat on the floor "If those whores use their bodies, I use me brains."

"Commendable" Madara chuckled "With a look like yours I thought you would do exactly that to be honest."

She snorted again and ignored his remark.

"You are from the Northern Water Tribe aren't you?"

"W-what?" she was shocked by his spot-on question.

"Yes, yes you are" he grinned.

"What difference does it makes? And ye haven't told me what ye wanted."

"Alright let's start with that then, my name is Madara Uchiha."

"Ye already know me name, Kaliya."

"I initially wanted to interrogate you while giving you false hope of life and eventually get rid of you" he said with an expressionless face.

"And what changed?" she wasn't surprised, she did the same many times over.

"Your brains, that's what changed… tell me Kaliya of the Northern Water Tribe, would you be willing to work for me?" Madara grinned.


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I hope you are having a good day you handsome sausages, i am posting this chapter today because i might take a break on sunday, i appreciate the ones that worry about my health but i am actually a very avid writer, in my head i already have certain scenes from the final arc of ATLA canon just waiting to be put on paper, honestly writing this fanfiction is being a blast to me i am enjoying it for real, specially after receiving so many praises.

Stay awesome and have a lovely weekend, Cheers!

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