Lotus Flower (BL)

LV 3

TofSpades

I've read on many books on Webnovel but this one stands out the most. It has an intriguing storyline that made me fall in love with it, I would highly recommend the book

LV 3

Chase_Xavier_123

Great story. The mc Lui Xian is in one sided love with the emperor that he served for 10 years. The story shows us his journey to get over his love, while getting death threats like assassination, etc. This in one-way helps him to meet with Feng Shao (he is really good looking). The mc also faces cold shoulder from little Shao but with them interacting mc's feeling for the emperor starts to fade away. The process of mc losing feeling for the emperor didn't happen instantly unlike other cliche story were in just one moment the mc starts to hate the person he loved for eternity. This made the novel realistic for me. The fighting scen needed some more words to define. The novel isn't focusing on martial arts so this might do to. Well, can the mc not stole herbs from feng shao 😨? I feel bad for little shao who is apparently 30 🤔 is this even possible?

LV 2

Lamelle

Shameless review from author! First of all I am just supporting myself for all the effort I am putting in this novel. I would like to tell you that you might find some errors in the novel, this is because English is not my first language and I am also not a professional writer but I hope you like the story line and help correct mistakes here and there. If you have liked the novel I hope you recommend it to others

LV 4

Kandpalbhaskar010

The story is well-written and the plot is interesting and offers a rather unique premise. Conversations are well written and there are close to no grammatical mistakes which makes the reading more pleasurable. All and all, the work has great potential. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters.

LV 2

Dvanzy6

Despite of what others might say, I am extremely in love with the way you describe the emotions of your character. How forbidden love can feed the fire in your soul but at the same time eat you from inside. This was just a work of art. Keep it up!

LV 3

Luminous_Arcadian

It was an interesting story that has a great plot. The writing style of the author was very easy to comprehend. Although, there were quite a few grammatical errors and misuses of punctuation marks. I think it could be better to add more details and stabilize the characterization of the characters. That was only my concern but, so far, it was still a decent read.

LV 4

Aravind_S

The way the novel is written is good. The characters were quite engaging. The plot is interesting, I hope the Author will update with more stable chapters.

LV 12

Pryges

Honestly, I'm so curious. The mystery in the story is well made and make the reader long for the next chapter. The story seems to shows us how Mc get over his one side love I guess? Xiao Feng is an interesting person and I want to know his story eagerly. Overall the story is well written and you are kinda drowned in it immediately. Good job keep going!! 4d

LV 13

Jo_J

An interesting story! You bring up a very difficult topic to write about - difficult, 'forbidden' love. The storyline is intriguing, your characters are expressive. The descriptions are nicely written, and the world background interestingly presented. Don't worry about the language. You are doing well. Good luck with the contest!

LV 4

REaper

A really well written novel, I was very intrigued by the way the character has been described and the scenes has been portrayed, it was really really good, It can turn out to be a very good novel. All the best author, Keep it up

LV 5

KazuhiroSeijuro

I think overall you did a good job, the first chapter was really well written. But sometimes you tend to over explain the character emotions or thoughts which kinda ruin the pace of the story, some of your scenes aren't describing the characters's actions well. and try to use more commas, less as, and, but. The way you slowly reveled the unrequited love triangle of Lui and the prince was good. I still think it has room for improvement. Good job. 👍

LV 3

Itsuki_Suzuki

I see... what an interesting plot. The start of the story is well written and no grammatical errors, maybe? Yeah. I love the characters I hope they end up together!,

LV 3

Arlemit

Great story with a very interesting plot development. Nice novel, really enjoyed reading it so far. I recommend it to anyone.

LV 2

Cyclxne

Great read, left me hanging though. Write more chapters! Only problem I can see is minor spelling errors, though they can be easily fixed. Just use Grammarly or something when writing in the future, helps a lot with common writing mistakes and such. Keep it up, author!

LV 4

Bunny_Junnie

It's really interesting! Though I don't read this genre much, I can say it's gonna be a great and interesting story! I fall for it just by reading the synopsis. Plot is really well defined and I can feel the story! Great work author! Keep it up!

LV 3

MichelleLeeee

So far , this is interesting. You start off with an emotional feel and MC’s long love for the first son, but then joined him on a journey of what situations were happy with his life and why. Author has some spelling mistakes that easily fixable, but also wrote in a way that was easy to read and understand. If you still wondering if you should read, I say give it a chance. You might end up liking it ❤️

LV 12

26stars

This is an interesting novel! I love the way the author describe the situation. The characters also left deep impression. Will be good watching a drama adaptation from this novel. Keep it up the good work!