Legendary Ancient Saiyan System

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LuciferFall

Best work buddy I like it so continue your writing and plz update New chapter's 😈😈😈😃😃😈😈😈😈😃😈😃😈😃😈😃😈😃😈😃😈😃😈😃😈😃😈😃😈😃😈

LV 4

JOKER_JAY

this story is promising so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work

LV 11

purple_kidneys

Hey, I know this is the author here, but this is my first ever book created so don't judge too much, uhh yes, mc will be pretty OP, I won't give any spoilers but you should read it, If you guys have any suggestions, feel free to send me them and I might add them into the novel

LV 2

god_of_time

i really like where this is going and I will be waiting for more chapter ..................................................................

LV 13

funmaxwell

so the story's grammar is pretty good. the system was kind of interesting and the character seemed all right. that's about all the good things I can say about it. why the low rating then. well the author doesn't seem to know his Cannon very well or have done any homework and it's to the point it makes me wonder if he's even a dragon Ball fan. as most dragon Ball fans still think the wish is limited to one from shenron but that actually changed in the cell saga of dragon Ball z to three wishes. in the story he goes to Earth way before dragon Ball even starts and asks shenron for not one wish but three which he shouldn't be capable of because that was only something that became possible 2/3 through dragon Ball z. so clearly the author has not watched dragon Ball at all which precedes dragon Ball z and about 70% of dragon Ball z. because throughout most of dragon Ball series shenron had only been able to Grant one wish. also the author seems unaware the dragon balls can't be found for one year after making a wish upon them. because in this story right upon making a wish on them he goes and finds them two days later to make another set of three wishes. this break from Canon was just too much. it makes me wonder whether the authors is actually a fan of the dragon Ball series that includes dragon Ball and dragon Ball z and super/gt.