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Unlucky kid gets reincarnated and becomes the youngest billionaire the world has ever seen and enters a school
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Moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee thanks for the effort author-san 👌👊🙏
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Hope u dont stop updating dont see alot of fanfics that keep going for a long time ............................................................................................................ ..............................................
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You just have to reread your own work, cause most if not all of your spelling errors are just simple fixes. Theirs also that text talk your doin which is really annoying. The character is also annoying, he's a psychopath which I'm fine with but you sometimes make him act emotionally weird. I may have missed it but why did they try to escape he seemed perfectly fine with being there.
This novel has the potential to be good, but can you please put proper punctuation marks and double-check your spelling? You can also put proper spacing between sentences so that the it will be easier to read. Things like spelling, proper punctuation marks, and good grammar will immensely improve your story. I couldn't get past chapter 2 because it was a headache to read. I hope this story improves in the future chapters.