เรื่องย่อ
The King of Blackmire is hoping to create a generation of the royalty but the Queen die due to childbirthing. The King lose his mind and stab the throat of the kid and order his guard to throw away in the palace. This is the story of a young man name Jack who got the brain of a general but has a life of a peasant
สถานะพลังงานรายสัปดาห์
-- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง 
-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
4รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
I love the story, while reading it you can really feel that your in a fantasy world as the author explain the world where MC is currently in. Also I can feel that it is like in MMORPG which also based on the fantasy setting which plus point too. I'm looking forward to the story ^_^
Definitely a great beginning. I love how you are very descriptive with the build up of your world which is great. There's some grammatical errors here and there but still its definitely a great story. You can always improve on your Writing style as you only started writing keep up the good Work. I'll continue on reading and support your Book. Have a fun writing. [img=recommend][img=update]
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Very on point, a bit of mistakes here and there, but overall a splendid job on this one. introduction of characters, the buildup, it's all easy flowing. i liked it, waiting on next chap
I love the story and no to mention the story is ongoing and the character for me is so likable Keep it up man you doing just fine just enjoy writIng