Keep Walking

LV 4

Liam_Hunt_0618

Rating: 3.8 out of 5 / 7.6 out of 10 The concept of this novel is unique and interesting, its implementation convincing. Already the first chapter is able to pull in the reader even though the story might be hard to follow at first due to the characters being introduced as just letters. But there is a good reason behind that, and it gets solved soon enough. While the quality of it drops significantly over some chapters in my opinion, there is always a certain extent of suspension throughout the novel which keeps you reading nevertheless. And to follow along is worth it, since the story gets really exciting especially around the middle part presenting some good plot twists. Around that time, also the characters are subject to interesting and logical changes, becoming distinctive individuals slowly but surely, each with their own background and likeable or repulsive traits. I have to admit though that there is no character really to my liking, and sometimes they also appear too shallow or illogical from my point of view, but that gets covered up with a good enough explanation and the background of the story in general. Towards the end, the niveau of suspension might drop a bit yet you still want to keep on reading in order to see how their journey ends and to get an answer to all your questions. Regarding questions and mysteries, there are appearing some scattered along the storyline, each of them giving the novel some extra spice, all of them being cleared in a satisfying way at the latest in the end. The end might be not to everyone's taste, but it keeps us readers looking forward to more. Overall, especially if you are interested in the concept behind the story, you should definitely give it a try. And if you like it, please support the writer as I see great potential in them. Thank you very much. All the best, Liam Hunt (Account Name: Liam_Hunt_0618)

LV 4

Jeffery_XXVI

Now being honest its alot better than i expected it would be, It starts off well and where ifs at currently is okay as well. The writing quality is nice, grammar is spot on and everything else is good enough to give you a worthwhile experience. The cover art slaps and so do the fonts, Everything is Well made and the concept For the book seems original enough. But it’s missing something, Prose on its own is hard to follow and with the way the characters are written its rather confusing. The plot moves well but i can’t really seem to care because the characters aren’t interesting(this Is As of chapter 4) the characters will still grow and when they do I’ll update my review.

I'm looking forward to the rest of this story, it seems like a lot of amazing things are going to happen and they'll be a nice twist at the end

LV 1

tmax7official

Lovely Premise. The introduction shows promise and this will be a masterpiece when done...Looking forward to the next chapter N is Him!!!!!

I am enjoying the world and the mystery behind it and I want to see more of it..The character design is also something I like with how you went into it..overall it was a nice read

such a nice start tbh. Great premise would love to see where this goes

pretty good first chapter and unique premise, loved the characters' interactions. can't wait for the next chapter !