Jujutsu Kaisen: All for one

LV 14

Kaptagon

Good idea, poor execution. MC lacks depth, not just MC Side characters also lacks depth, their behaviours and emorions feels fake. Interactions and talks between characters feels forced, Love interest development feels forced(seen worse), cause and effect is not integrated in story atleast effect part is lacking. Writing quality is subpar, this effects flow of story and interactions. When MC interacts with potential love interest i somehow feel like this is a chinese novel... Too much use of (~) it is irritating and distrupts flow of story. Lastly MC has little inner dialogue and verry little explenation about everything so this makes me feel like the world is desolate or a domestic dome.

LV 1

Lucas_Otaku

(PT-BR) A história está boa, não tenho nada a criticar em específico, até doei uma pedra de poder para motivar o autor a continuar e se a história mantiver um bom número de capítulos postados e uma boa qualidade vou dar mais quando eu tiver.

LV 2

ponysha

Интересно, но слишком быстро происходит всё ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... .........

LV 4

jeffmiste

another good jjk fanfic.................................................................................................................................

LV 4

Emery_Flewelling

So far (3 chapters in) the story is engaging and has some real potential. The mc doesn't seem super shallow and has some depth to him. The interactions are tame so far but that's because of the low chapter count. So ill say this will really shine as a hidden gem when we get to the 5-10 chapter mark.