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few days later

Gil was sitting beside the lake and was depressed

Gil: why why i don't have a talent.. sob.. sob

i tried so hard and worked in training my body and swordman art i was good in everything but now this doesn't matter

says while crying and unhappiness with the heavens

Della:Gil my child don't cry please it doesn't matter if you don't have talent i will still love you not me alone your father grandfather and sister will love you.

said with a worry and pain expression

Gil:I'm alright mother don't worry about me

says with a forced smile

William:Gil come on we have to meet your grandmother

Della:let's go Gil

Gil nodding his head

in a mansion a beautiful women looks in her late 20

the women:hurry up William

That is my grandma her name is Luna

William:here he is mother

Luna:this boy is your son

William:yes

Luna: well from now he's not you son

mother/father:WHAT DO MEAN

said with shock face

while i was absolutely scared and worry that i will be abandoned by my family

Luna:he is trash we can't have him in the family our family is one of the greatest of all

we can't have a useless man from the main branch.

William:but moth..

Luna:no but i don't want to hear anything go throw that garbage.

she didn't even look at me i was so humiliated and a made a promise to my self that a will make her regrets what she said

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faw days later

in the door of a mansion

William:don't worry son we will send you to a friend of mine he is top expert at swordman art he will train you to be a powerful even without a talent and don't forget that are talent is not everything.

said my father with a guilty face

Gil:i understand father.

i said with a determination i hope to return stronger than ever

Della:son i hope you be alright without us and don't forget that we love you and will never abandoned you.

says mother while crying and hugging me

i look every where but i couldn't find my sister i was so disappointment

Gil:mother where are my sister why she is not here to send me of.

Della:your sister his a training session with her grandmother.

Gil:i see

it turn out that my sister doesn't like me anymore after i didn't show a talent she start to ignore me and didn't even look at me i was so sad but there will be a day that a will make her love and respect me.

Gil:alright mom dad I'm going .

this day is the day that change my life.


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well well that was fun.

anyways how do you feel about this chapter is it good or bad .

and do you wanted fast pace oe slow one.

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