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นักเขียน: General_Paragon

4.45 (13 เรตติ้ง)

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(Rewrite of Journey of Yun Che and his Companion with different options)
Jean, a teenager, was a boy who was Always alone, kicked out from his family, dropped out from the school, even random people would stay away from him, because he has an innate talent to unconsciously release killing intent.
He didn't liked this, even when he would look at a mirror he would be scared of himself.
With time, the killing intent got stronger, to the point of killing insects just with his presence, he couldn't do anything without scaring anything, until...

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General_Paragon

Hello guys, now I am going to talk about my novel while shamelessly put myself 5 stars, first of all, this is a rewrite of Journey of Yun Che and his Companion, here the settings and the powers will be different, but the concept of being in a mindscape will be the same, I do not speak English, so you can expect some or many grammar errors, the mc here will be a bit more limited than his version on the previously mentioned novel, and unlike the other, here will not be any sequel, and this is a fanfiction of Against the Gods. Peace.

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5yr
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goldzi

Another droppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

5yr
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RVNGER

Hey!!!!!! As a fan im going to shamelessly give this a 5 star. And another thing, i think this novel has an interesting side in it. There should be a surprise in the story much later.In short i like the idea of this novel and This novel has a great potential to read. I have been reading the author books for a while now and i think it would be great.

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Yeavon
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I had such high hopes for this fiction and then I read it to the end only to be disappointed. this fiction had such potential with the wishes he was granted, instead the author made the fic into a ****ty side support character.....no not even that he became someone elses plot armor.... WHY? Conclusion: I regret reading this due to time wasted, I'm sorry...

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5yr
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Solate

No hace falta decir mucho si tan solo siguieran esta novela fuera mucho mejor, no cabe duda de que seria una buena novela ligera el personaje Jean tiene una buena personalidad y el auto determina cada persona muy particularmente en cuestión de la forma en lo hizo al recrearlo como un zanpakuto debo admitir que es bastante original

5yr
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LonelyCrow

So far, the story is going better than the previous one :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

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Yukister

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5yr
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Familiar

The protagonist being a Zanpakutō was really surprising to me. I am curious if him being scared of the rain is just because of his dislike for it or if there was something that had occurred that gave him PTSD

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5yr
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Poetic_Lord

Hi! I didn’t read already but I liked very much the idea. Hope you continue to create this interesting work and certainly I’ll read it when I have time!

5yr
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Kuromego

Yeah !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

5yr
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UnnervedFrog

Looks promising, but the writing style for communication does not work well for me. I do enjoy Ex-True God do I’ll probably enjoy this.()(););)();))(()(()(()())))))())()((((()()()()!()()()()()()()()()();)()()(()(()();:;:;:;;:(;:(;:;(::)(;;)

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SpaceRendingPig

Yay, amazing. Just update often and don’t drop any of ur books. Journey of yum Che was a great book, pity u dropped iit... I have high expectations for this novel

5yr
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Otakusalem

Nice amazing more updates😳👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😉😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

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