In the Academy as Sukuna

In tho the the writing in this this story is a little undefined I really think it has a lot of potential if the author really puts in some work and work on the development of the characters and add sone unique to personality to them. In all this is quite good for a nebwie author.

LV 4

Rynin

The writing quality has been improving, though I must warn you that there is a lot of shortening of words. An example..... beacuse to cuz. Updates regularly. You don't have to wait many days. Character design, it's not really brought up that much on what the characters look like. Though, we do get a description for our Mc. The World Background isn't really laid out for you. There are hints, as one of the characters mentions villains. Which leads me to believe the world might be like My Hero Academia. Story development, not much to say here other than it seems our main character might end up going against the world. As a villain. However, he himself isn't inherently evil. Unless you count the fact that he's Sukuna. Looks promising. And for any improvements. I'd think it'd be expanding on the other main characters. I also really like the Mc.... As the strongest Curse, Sukuna, fought the cat, Fraud Gege, he began to open his Nah, I'd win. Gege shrunk back in his fear. Then Sukuna said.... "Your name is now Ge/ge!" Time Freeze! "Ahhh." Gege smiled. "My anti- Sukuna technique I haven't used since Kusakabe. This legendary technique is called.....

LV 3

nectarifle

idk man started reading when this had only like 3 chapters, and I've seen a dramatic increase in writing quality. I've also been reading this longer than I ever expected to, so that's a plus the story's pretty interesting, I almost never expect what happens next and it somehow still makes sense wish there weren't so much fodder characters 🙏

LV 14

Noiir

Pretty good Sukuna fanfic PS: I was forced to write a review 😭

LV 14

Darth_Evolution898

Like the story so far unsure where the story will take us we shall see

LV 4

XunKun

after reading half of this, i noticed there were some inconsistency, like isn't the mc supposed to be transmigrated in a game that he plays a lot? how come he doesn't even know half of the events that's been happening? or atleast comment about how much the story has diverged from the original script? also the world building isn't much, sometimes i imagined that this is set on some medieval setting, and sometimes I Imagine it in some modern setting. the writing is fine, and the character designs are fine

LV 4

jeffmiste

pretty good oc setting, entertainingly cliche characters and a funny mc ....................................................................................