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Improvise, Adapt, Evolve (Multiverse) (Now on DxD)
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So basically this is just a SI, a concept, not a very good one, and I’m probably not gonna continue it, maybe if i get support enough but i just have ideas and they aren’t very good for long novel because you end up op pretty fast and that’s not good for novels but if you like the wishes o have an idea of how to improve them comment, i will read it… Harem Alert, i will probably have a harem for the MC
Ps English isn’t my main language
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actually the most potentially great fanfiction but he ruined it in the second chapter with his last wish and he earned the most hated author in My tags.☺️
The grammar is pretty bad and i couldn't get through it so i can't say much about the story. if you dont care about the grammar then you're good
Everything was fine, until the MC blocked his memories and created a curse that not only affected the MC (is it negative or will it help the MC?). Will a more powerful Draco Malfoy appear? Or could there be a more intelligent or envious Ron Wesleey? 😦🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔😦😦😦😦🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
A good novel, quite good in fact. It's just that I can't read it anymore even with the curse. Can't say the same as the others.........................
I like the curse that was part of his wishes. Plus it is really well thought out. Took a star out because of the typos/auto correct. Almost another for the part when the mc would have his memories returned by 20 ... I mean it would make sense for some other verse but hpverse... it wouldn't since the reincarnation part would fail being true especially when mc is actively participating in the canon. Hoping you continue to finish this. I'd love to go back and have a binge next time. Maybe you planned it to be just an idea to be picked up but... I can honestly say this is one of the better than what I expected it to be. Thanks for a great binge!
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It took me all my willpower to finish reading about HPverse that I am mentally tired just by looking at the title of the novel but overall it's a great novel once you get pasted the HP verse just hope DXD has a lot to offer
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A wish fulfillment story thats honest. Enjoyed the read, though the grammar could be better. The training seal/. curse could be explained better - still don't understand everything about that. Thanks a lot for the story
I totally love it. .. The abstract concepts that others never thought of that you make use of are helping to make the story more interesting .... So yeah please mass release [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I couldn't get through the first chapter. It just was below my bottom line for bad grammar and excessive long sentences. please take some pride in your work author.😭