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Have you ever wondered what a character in a novel or in a game should be?
Do they eat? Sleep? Do they have their own life when you are not reading or playing?
They do not.
When you are not doing anything, we stay still.
To be fair, think about your own life. Is it different from a game without a system? You can not see behind your back, similar to how a character has to render it in a game.
But at least, you have your own life.
While I have to watch the protagonist of the novel find his way into the pants of the female leads.
This is my destiny.
I'm not jealous. Not at all.
Tags: Psychological, Yandere, Harem, Gore, Dark, Rape, Resets, R-18, School life, ...
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If you drop this I'll kill you myself. .............................. ......................... ......................... gwehwehewrhrhskjfghbsdajkfgbewohgbweo oeh
Guys i just wanted to tell you guys this novel is totally good Yandere harem (check) Gore(Check) Read this novel This might be your cup of tea you can drink but please this novel has potential . . . . . . . . Guys join Parmesan's Discord Server!
I forgor to do an author's shameless review so here it is. What should you be looking for while reading eroge? Comedy. Deep lore. Yanderes. Pain. If you are too fed up with the usual 2 dimensional characters and fast paced action with little to no substance, then eroge can be a new wind. But hey, if you want to ask anything, I'm all ears (and cheese). And don't just listen to me, read through the other reviews, too.
Straight up 100/10 I like the story and it's pretty unique, even though it's only a few chapters I already got hooked up,please don't drop this and keep up the great work .
Ahhh...the feels dude, the feels, aside from the yandereness and the fantastic plot, there were some parts that really made my eyes a little wet not gonna lie. Keep it up author and thank you for the novel it made me realize something in my real life too.. THANK YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART.
This… this is an absolute gem. I am in complete awe 🫢 of how much story, character development, emotions, and plot is fitted so cohesively yet chaotically together that it sucks in all of my attention that I couldn’t stop reading and thoutoughly enjoying myself in just 17 chapters. It’s been too long since I’ve read a story that had me so invested into genuinely wanting a satisfying conclusion of a story. I want this story to do well and progress for as long as the author possibly can with the same quality he has presented us with. Thank you for writing.
i came here for yandere novel that killing each other to win mc heart but not to feel ༼;´༎ຶ ༎ຶ༽ m....................................
This is simply mind blowing. Never had I thought that I would encounter a well executed story like this in this platform. I didn't have any great hopes at first and just thought I will eventually get bored with it. But strangely enough, the story which I thought was boring made me spend the night reading, refusing to skip any words. I believe I could never reach this kind of skill in weaving a story, I greatly respect you Author Parmesan, this novel is marvelous.
A very new concept and I can give 5 stars just for the uniqueness of this story. Character development is marvelous till the latest chapter and the mc is just perfect 💯✨ and fmcs are also portrayed very beautifully and their possessiveness is also justified due to the world setting. I highly recommend everyone to at least give it a try and I guarantee you will be hooked.
I'm loving the story so far. It reminds of melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya mixed with deadpool.🤌
Okay. This is my first review so I did not know it wasn't a simple 1 to 5 stars. If it was i swear I would've given 5 stars but I'm not the only one who knows Parmesan's updating schedule. I know it exists now but it didn't before. Anyway now that I've given a reason for not giving 5 stars (Don't kill me), Ican get down to the story. This was definitely a new experience for me as this introduced me to the eavesdropping genre. I hadn't realized until then but I'd never thought about how life would go if other people could heat your thoughts. And the author writes it all out beautifully. On to the pacing. This particular book is abysmally slow, buy you won't realize it unless you take a step back (and even then you might miss it)May the spoilers (not really spoilers) begin.First we are introduced to C. a human stickman. That isn't really what he is, but as he is faceless, it's a good analogy.Yup. it's exactly as I said it, a faceless mc. Check the tags again. Harem? Check. He rizzed them up without a face. That's pretty hard to beat, but I digress. Throughout the course of the story so far we are introduced to what you would call "cookie cutter characters" A shy but handsome 'mc' , a proper class president, an overprotective childhood friend and so on. But remember, this is a yandere novel. So throw morals out the window. With this author though, that still isn't enough. Read and you'll see why
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It's a well written yandere harem, do I need to say more? It's the only novel where I don't mind the MC's monologue as the author makes it very entertaining. Do read it.
Hello! A review for this awesome novel! Summary: A person transmigrates into an eroge game as an extra(Classmate C). This is an eroge in which there are several yanderes who love the cliche protagonist of the eroge (name - Hans)(indecisive, dense, no confidence etc.). Whenever something major happens in the loop/try, the eroge restarts from the starting point. Classmate C has experienced several thousands? of loops and tries. He had done many efforts in changing the original story but was unsuccessful. However, in the current loop, things have been much different... If you want to know more, then read the story! Let's get to reviewing! [Note: All things written below are because of my personal tastes. Some might not like it.] ---------- Writing Quality - Writing Quality has been really good if you compare it with the level in web novels. Proper punctuation! Ample Vocabulary! Good Grammar! I might have missed some grammar mistakes as I was too engrossed in the story. (5/5) Story Development - Story Development is phenomenal. It is not predictable and has some twists and turns. It keeps the readers on the edge and makes them wait for the next chapter. Most of the time I visit the site or app just to check if this novel is updated or not. (5/5) Character Design - I love the character design for the heroines. They are not one or two dimensional. They have their own feelings and thoughts. When you read their thoughts, you can know that this is synonymous with their characters. I also like the personality of Classmate C. Though, I didn't like him because of his wimpy nature and to push the heroines toward Han(the main character of eroge). But after reading his previous experiences, it is understandable. In the latest chapters, he is beginning to change as well. (5/5) Updating Stability - Yes, the updating stability for this novel is not the Webnovel usual of 1 chapter per day but I will prefer quality over quantity. Taking 2-5 days for a chapter is fine. I will prefer an interesting and quality chapter twice or thrice a week instead of a messy chapter daily. (5/5) World Background - This is the thing which currently lacks in the novel. The only thing we know about the world background is that it is a school in which the main cast studies. I will hope for this issue to be sorted out and we can know about the world background smoothly instead of as an info dump. Currently 24 chapters. (2/5) --------- You might be wondering why my rating shows (5/5) instead of less due to the world background's rating - (2/5). That's because this is currently my favourite novel out of all the novels I am following. I want this novel to have my whole support. An issue that annoys me - It will be helpful if you put the name of the person whose POV is being shown. Like - [Kurokawa's POV]. It's not a big deal but I need to read 2-3 paragraphs to know whose perspective I am reading from. Also, the author keeps asking to join his discord server, so I guess, join it? Anyways, keep it up, author! I hope you don't drop it or else........ . . . . . . . . . . Wait a minute, just let me get a whetstone..... Phew, here it is! Let me get something else too... Ahh, here is a good old knife... *Scratch* *Scratch* What? Haven't you ever seen a person sharpen a knife, huh? . . . . . . . What do you mean that I am threatening the author? It's just a normal day-to-day activity. I want to use it for cooking! Ah, people these days, jumping to conclusions...
I was having a hard time discovering this novel because it's practically not on the yandere tag results, I'm glad I found it through scrolling for quite some time
Absolute Gem! This is what I am looking for years after watching Mirai diary. This hooked me up with just a 14 chapters, Now I rooting for that Laura character; I wish her happiness with my whole heart. Oh, I forgot to say something important.... More Chapters Pleaseeee!!!!!!!!
Maan you've really improved since the first time I've read your novel. Just wanted to say it's a banger that seems to be shaping up into becoming a yandere thriller maybe but mostly for our mc since he's denser than osmium. But what's a yandere fic without a dense mc. If the mc is aware already the fun wouldn't be there
If you drop this I'm gonna jump in a hot tub................................................................................................
This is the most splendid novel I have ever read!The details, character designs and the world background are so properly executed, I even cried at some point at the mc's suffering because I'm so engrossed 🤧🤧The writing quality and Author's imagination are so engaging to read, it blew my mind that such a novel of this quality still exists today after reading countless brain-dead-end novels.Only the updates are pretty bad, since this novel is heavily underrated,But THAT quality in each chapter compensates for it.I hope you won't stop writing, just don't. Hope this novel and the Author get the attention they deserve!
Truly, I do enjoy this story. This is not a string of words. Nor is it some form of half made concept. This is a fully fledged novel, with every word making you wish to read more. Many times, I'll catch myself with a grin on my face as I read a chapter. It is simply great. It contains neither powerful heroes or some terrifying opponent from the depths of villainy. This is far simpler than any of these stories. So come, join me in this review as I describe to you exactly what form of immersive entertainment this is. First off, the writing quality. When you read this story, you won't be searching for mistakes or laughing when you find them. No. You will be far to busy as your eyes flick from paragraph to paragraph, hanging on to the dialogue and the development of C's odd reality. Words are rarely wasted in this novel, and though during certain scenes of exposition may find yourself questioning why the author is restating something, I cannot say it is that much of an issue. They are minor things, but not enough for me to have any true problems with it. As for the update stability? Don't rely on this novel for daily entertainment. If there is something here that Parmesan truly fails at, its the ability to pump out chapters on a daily basis. When considering when the next chapter of this novel may come out, one must not think quickly, one must think eventually. Story Development. It is slow. To an unreasonable degree. Many things about this novel are quite good but the flow of time is a unrealistic crawl. The developments that happen in the one day we have so far experienced, could have happened over the course of a week. Parmesan is very dead set on making sure we know everything about everyone by the end of the one day that still has not passed. It's unnecessary, character development in the future could possibly be sped up by this, but that could've been done as we went along. Instead we have been limited to a bunch of small introductions which may end up reaching all the way to chapter 40 if there are more heroines to explore. If I were to do it, I would have had us learn things about the characters as they did them, exploring the motivations behind their actions as they put them forwards, while explaining the necessary basis of their personality to make sure it doesn't slow down these developments. All in all, it could have been done much better, without the stifling stagnancy we currently have to deal with. On the other hand, the character design that we have been provided with through this unreasonably long opening arc has been Stellar! Each character has their own personality that is held by a base trait. Kurokawa is dark seeming, while Rachel is a greedy b****** who wants nothing less than absolute ownership of her partner. Laura is a seeming strict class president, while C is supposed to be a simple weak mob, complaining about the popular kids. They all have something down at the base one can remember. If they were in a normal slice of life they could still excel as they are. However they are not. They are all within a yandere Eroge. They have nothing but the greatest setting to make use of their personalities. C our main character, is not a plot device as many main characters normally are. He is a catalyst for others. His trait that makes him ideal is the way he interacts with the readers, explaining and exploring the past of his environment and the things in it. He is the perfect window into the story because he knows every nook and cranny of it. And as the sentience granting bug grows and disrupts the world, he is capable or realizing all the things that are off and drawing our attention to them while showing us what it should have been like. He is our connection to the world, and as such he makes an amazing protagonist. On the other hand, the heroines we have been introduced to have certainly been standout. However they simply haven't done anything due not having the chance to. They have potential, but are locked in this single stagnant day that Parmesan refuses to end. Thus I can't really say much about them besides the fact that their existence is simply minimal due to the fact that they have little impact. So what if Rachel does some scary stuff in the past. It was explained to us. That takes away any fear we may have of her. Kurokawa is the very same. The reason many of the readers like laura is because we get to see things as she does them, and explore her interactions with C as they happen. She is a character who properly exists and grows with the story. The others simply don't get that chance. This is another of Parmesans failures that I hope to see rectified in the future. Finally, we have the world background. That stagnancy I have been complaining about wasn't completely bad. There were some things that were made better because of it. And that's the world background. Worlds and Stories are built on their lore. Both the lore built by the present characters, and beings of the past who allowed them to exist. In this case, the beings of the past are the characters of the present, so all of the interactions and situations spoken of feel in tune with the rest of the world. On the other hand, the world they live in is a game, simplifying the process of building a world that may have under normal circumstances required a massive info dump to understand. Certain things just aren't explained because they either don't exist or anyone can just figure it out. The world is simple. It's not deep, old or waning. It's new, fresh, and based off of logic put together by the author. Here the real world simply doesn't apply, and that's why the story is incredibly immersive. Its one of the reasons I love the story. Anyways, I enjoyed reading up to this point. I now await your return.
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