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I got transmigrated into World of One Piece, but no system?
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CARROT the best non human girl.Cute.Hot.Strong.Funny.All in one.Please InstaMoist add her to luffy crew in the future.Dont make the same mistake as Oda.Number of Haters when Carrot stayed with the rest of Minks was bigger then Red Line.
Ok so everyone who reads the story synopsis completely forget all of that. It's literally a hot mess of everything.
I read this story and i must say .It is quite new idea.thare are a lot of FF whare transmigrant is a Luffy .But i did not faund until now one whare Luffy died.This is before Luffy eat Sun God DF right.?.Also please dont forget abaut Boa Hancock she can be great ally for Luffy if he plays his cards right.
Yes it is true .cannon ONE PIECE is very unrealistic and has many very dumb elements.thas why i prefer to read ff because sometimes they authors can write them very well.Hey author what is your opinion of nami.? i like to ask this each time i find nice one piece ff.
I had to re-evaluate my review. My frind there is nothing realistic about a 7 year old sleeping around. The story was doomed from the beginning unfortunately.
Luffy ton enfant il a moins de 13 ans quand il part dans le monde donc quand il est affreux chat c'est un enfant mais tu lui fais avoir des relations sexuelles bravo l'auteur
you'll have better chances baiting readers, by writing synopsis for others author.
I write this because i forgot to add this in my last review. As this Luffy is much smarter what he should first do is go to Nami island and kill Arlong.and then get Nami and her sister Nojiko to his crew she deserve better life then what she get in cannon.
One Piece girls are the best.but sometimes Oda realy gets carried away with Fan Service .and Fap Material..
I cant wait when this luffy start his journey. I hope he will not do anything stupid.? that was cannon luffy thing.
we need a serious Time skip dude, The protagonist is a child, seven years old, and that's the biggest problem.
I kinda understand why you ff’s are not well recived, despite having a good gramar and good writing. Cuz you write the most boring scene. I dunno if your doing a build up such, but I skimmed through almost half of the chapter and seems to not miss anything. It might work on OG novel, but on FF where the readers know the plot. I was like ‘please do something interisting’, the lemon chaptie got my attention though. lol
Im glad the most of FF authors make Luffy have normal human being reactions when dealing with stuff Late teen should have knowladge abaut and how to deal with them.
This version of luffy who knows how to read and write and likes books will get a lots of positive attention and brovnie points from Nico Robin.
I have already read the other two fanfics that you have, obviously it would be just as good and it is much better without a system since it makes it boring
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''Realistic'' yeah right... There is a lemon scene with 5 year old mc and Makino. So don't waste your time reading this if you came for the 'realistic' in the summary.