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After Lu Xiaoran transmigrated to a world of cultivation, his trashy system never got activated. Helpless, Lu Xiaoran could only depend on himself and develop his cultivation while maintaining a low profile. It was only after Lu Xiaoran became the strongest existence in the sect did the system finally get activated. Unexpectedly, this was a system that allowed him to increase his own cultivation by taking in disciples and helping them cultivate. All he had to do now was to find his first disciple!
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Wonder if the MC will be similar to how the old master of the comic "Master of lightning knives". Interested in reading about a nice bond developing. There's other novels with the same premise on this platform, but they tend to go downhill. Comedy keep the story alive.
I hate these types of web novels. I love the reborn as an elder in a sect(please recommend some if you know) but I hate the chatterbox systems and the "you received the supreme emperor undying strongest cultivation method" it annoying and lazy writing. the author who wrote this should be embarrassed that There story has no character. 1/10 Also we did get an introduction to the realms just a "you haven't reached bla bla bla" and so we have no clue of the MC's Standing (at least in the first chapter which I won't be reading past).
Not my cup of tea personally because of the sexism in this story. Such as “Don’t waste your words like women, be a man” “Even a man most likely couldn’t do it, but she’s a delicate girl.” Roughly, im not gonna go back to the story and specifically go back and read through just to find those remarks but that’s roughly what it said.
Raw mtl : 我这么天才为何还要收徒弟 Auithor : 木易生火 Lv 5 Yo I am currently writing a Fan-fic about a Uchiha Itachi in the Naruto, if that interests you, please check it out. I strongly believe that if you read the first chapter, you will want to read the next chapter(s) too. I know, I’m shamelessly promoting myself using other novels, but a guys gotta get some exposure one way or another, am I right? Also, if you read this far and haven’t already checked out the novel you are now obligated to do so. Thanks to anyone who decides to check it out.
I've read the mtl of this and oh boy, this is a total disaster. Not worth it. ................... ................... ................... ................... ................... ................... ................... ................... ................... ................... ................... ...................
I'm going to give a really quick summary of my review. the author takes out what is arguably the only good point in the story for over half of it and expects people to continue to enjoy. you'll understand what I mean once you get to the higher world levels the first Arc as I would call it which is the lower world cultivation is pretty good. It's relatively well done not many mistakes the tad bit of sexism which is normal in these novels but there isn't much nationalism if any at all. my problem is when we get to the higher world and our main character gets separated from his disciples which is whatever. my problem though is how hard the author tries to force it so that the main character can't meet up with which is honestly the most interesting part of the story is group of disciples. anywhere from being way too far to have soul guidance work or just straight up ignoring the main characters summons even though they're his disciples. or the main character being too much of a coward to go help out his disciple who was being captured by someone way weaker than the main character. it'd be fine if it only went on for like 10 chapters or so but it's already been over 100 chapters of the author coming up with every excuse imaginable on why the main character can't see his disciples. and that would be fine if that wasn't what made the story interesting. the main characters pretty two-dimensional he doesn't have much development and it's reasonable it's explained why early on and his personality is pretty on set. you know what you're getting from the main character and he doesn't deviate from it. the disciples are pretty interesting they come up with a lot of the comedy in the story and they make it interesting to read. getting rid of them for over what is currently half of the story is ridiculous. by the way I'm up to chapter 400 basically so pretty close to the end and he still hasn't met up with his disciples. usually I would just keep reading some already here at the end but the chapters are a bit too long to make me want to finish reading this when there's over 100 plus chapters still and I see no way it can end so soon and I also see no reason why he can't meet up with his disciples. another one of my pet peeves with this novel is how much the author makes what is supposed to be a righteous sect evil. I understand the human heart isn't true most of the time. however when you're supposed to be a Buddha the only way you should be able to cultivate that type of Mantra would be if you have a heart of goodness a heart of gold to say, if you are truly able to be a good person at least that's usually how these stories go and how it looks like this story goes. so why is it that every person in the Buddhist sect is a horrendous person who likes to either torture people for fun or doesn't mind killing Innocents because they were in the way. I understand how these novels work most of the time but it's really drawing a blank here when the author tries so hard to make almost all of them evil except for a very few portion.
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I have mixed feelings about this one. Most of this is good, the Main Character is a cautious type protagonist and he gets a system where his strength increases as his Disciples strength increases. So, he takes desciples and most of the conflicts comes from them, their past enemies and what not. Then it turns out our MC has a super secret background and the strongest beings in existence are targeting him, that is also fine. It was good seeing the MC hide his strength, occasionally dealing with enemies then hiding again. Upto last 30 chapters or so. In the last 30 chapters, everything changes. Turns out there are even more powerful enemies, MC has an even bigger background. And his personality changes from a cautious type to hot-blooded xianxia protagonist. There is vague explanation provided for his change in attitude, but it's very jarring and it completely messes up the tone of the story before this last 30 chapters. for those who have read the ending, I think it would have been better if the last 30 chapter never happened. Hongjun dies in the final fight in Heavenly Court. Nameless Sect becomes the ruler of Three Realms and everyone lives happily ever after.
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It's good. The writing is decent (but could be improved). The story is focused on romance (which is always welcomed). His disciples aren't all or majority females who are in love with him (which I noticed a lost of these kind of stories have a tendency to do). He's not overt with his abilities though that might not be for long considering this latest chapter. The cultivation is very convoluted and confusing. Why didn't they just go with the generic cultivation system. One annoying thing is how the writer keeps on shoving it in your face that the MC is a genius. "but of course Li blah blah is x100 time more talented so his cultivation and learning is way faster so he learnt this in half a day even though it would take them years" on repeat. Keep in mind they are talking about so called S and SS-class talents. I'm just waiting for the story to introduce SSSSS-class talents at this point. This talent system is going to become redundant at some point honestly.
This novel is a rare jade among the trash on this site. And it's actually quite funny! The MC is powerful and he's kinda having fun. I really hope that it gets picked
This novel top tier I tell yah. To tier!!!! Also I'm doing this review because I'm a slave to this exp to a point where I want to start a cult. Who wants to join?
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Another trash novel. Mc only complains and call others hackers. The system also sucks. The story is nothing new and plot is also copy and paste. Don't recommend reading.
Its pretty funny not going too lie but the translation quality brings it down because it is not great. Pretty enjoyable so far and i haven't noticed any face slap Bs
it's actually good, his disciples are all talented but why you always make so many idiot characters? aaarrrggggghhhh
another novel ruined by poor translators. It started ok but after the trial ended it become worse by each chapter
I dont like MC who hide his power without nonsense, yeah Mc OP but he hide power like the lowest possible to avoid trouble. That suckk, he can just show a bit power and avoid more trouble. Fvkk so frustating
the only bad part of this novel is the MC, I feel he is very shallow, but his disciples are very funny, there comes a part where the novel becomes repetitive and the plot armor weighs heavily, and sometimes the author tries to put a mystery into the novel and fails miserably. It is worth reading in general. ( sorry for the bad English )