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I'm a psychopath : How do I take care of children?

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"William Teller or black crow, 21 year old male sex, who has killed more than hundreds of innocent victims. Not counting dozens of autopsies, according to the latest reports, is that true?"

It looks like a man with slightly pale skin, slim body with a pretty handsome face, has rather long black hair. And wearing black and white prison clothes.

"I don't know, I don't remember!" William answered with a smile.

After hearing William's words the man carrying the paper sighed, then put down the paper.

"Then do you have any last words? Like I'm sorry?" asked the man.

"Let me take another life?" replied William.

Receiving this answer, William, the man who brought the paper, smiled cynically. Then he turned around.

"As expected of a psychopath. Serve the sentence!"

Bang!

The sniper trigger is pulled, all three need to exit the sniper barrel simultaneously through the surrounding air. During this time William felt like the world was slowing down, he then closed his eyes enjoying his last breath.

Craat!

The bullet went straight through his skull. Fresh blood flowed from the hole in his head, flowing onto the black and white prisoner's clothing he was wearing dyeing it red.

Ding!

[Finding suitable candidate hosts.]

...

William Teller, a psychopath with hundreds of more victims, stood in the shooting room tied to an iron pole who was on death row.

After his death a miracle happened, William got a system to move to another world and was required to take care of children.

"System, you have to be kidding me!"

[Detecting host rejection.]

[Starting brainwave punishment]

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AlModem
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I like it, more psychopaths are good for the world. But honestly, there are a few sentences structured a little weirdly, though nothing a quick little edit can't solve. Do hope you keep it up, novel definitely has potential. I'm only a dozen or so in, so it's too soon to tell if you can make us care for the side characters in the warm scenes you've proclaimed. Though I'm certain you'll pull it off and the action will hit much harder as a result. Good luck and carry on!!

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Lazy_author

My work has dark elements, and some bloody scenes. On the other hand it will have a warm element, I'm trying to combine all of those elements. I hope you guys like it

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HotAsianBoy

Love to see a maniacal novel once in a while. You need to proof read your text before releasing, it helps alot! Interesting plot you have but it would be easier to read if it didn’t have many issues in it.

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Read "Level Up with Pills and Herbs" come and get to know author before he becomes a celebrity in Webnovel

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