HxH: Eternity

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Pandalph

Writing Quality: 5 stars: Compared to the previous book it's a lot better... I mean A LOT. Grammer doesn't have any obvious problems, though the downside is the number of words in a chapter is kinda bad... Stability of Updates: 5 stars: It's only chapter 5... Can't really say much on this one... However, so far the chapters have been quite often. Story Development: 4 stars: It's a bit fast, but that's also a good thing. Also, the plot at least so far is a bit dark... Character Design: 5 stars: Personally I love it, I don't know how to explain. The only thing I can say is that MC might need a therapist. World Background: 5 stars: First of all it's a HXH fic... Second of all while some things are outrageous the story thus far is the dark continent...

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RalphReader001

i hope the last chapter of this novel in the end