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After a failed mission results in the death of his entire unit and he is granted the Hollow Core System, low-ranking C-Class Chosen, Kael Solis, becomes the suspect of his own murder and embarks on a quest to uncover a conspiracy involving the government and the origins of the Hollow infection, creatures born from the poisonous Hollow Sun.
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เขียนรีวิวHoly crap! This story is just amazing and maybe one of the best covers I’ve seen! The style you write in is so easy and digestible and the characters are easy and fun to get to know. I hope to see you keep writing
The story is very interesting and compelling right from the start. While there are only a few chapters for now, You can feel the characters emotions. The quality of the writing itself impressed me right from the beginning. Once you have 10 chapters out, I will probably binge read the whole thing
Kael is an interesting personality, I like his instincts for survival he is truly captivating, the whole plot is entertaining I love your work so far ☺️❤️
Man, 9 chapters in and the plot + twists have made this story soooooooooooooo much better. i was expecting it to be good, but i didnt think it would be this goddamn good. gett inga glimpse into each characters backgrounds and their own individual stories made this even more *chefs's kiss*. i love the way things are described, i can picture things almost vividly, like im watching a movie or something. beautiful, keep up the good work‼️
Great story, dude... or girl... or whatever. My point is that this is a true potential. highly recommend.
Gotta give it up to the author. Its clear they take their craft seriously, I'd noticed as few rough mistakes in the earlier chapters, that isn't an issue in the later ones. Seems that they are improving as the story goes on. Hollow Sun is an excellent novel, and from what it seems, its only going to get better. Can't wait!
The prose is vivid and immersive, capturing the protagonist's emotions and the world’s harsh environment effectively. The setup is intriguing, with a strong hook about survival and mysterious powers.Kael is well-defined, though side characters could use more depth early on. Updating Stability The setting is atmospheric and unique. Conclusion: A well-written, immersive dystopian fantasy with a gripping premise. Worth following!
the story is so intriguing , and the character development is so awesome . especially the detailed description of the events.
Listen, this has amazing potential. Rendrik can fall in a ditch and stay there, but I digress. I love what the author is doing and hope to see more.
Love the potential of this, I'm a sucker for power fantasy novels with a system. The world building is also great and I really like the MC, the way the author builds suspense and adds in those devious cliff hangers is just *chefs kiss*
The way things are worded is just, *chef's kiss*. I love the setting and the visuals you give. The cliffhangers have me itching for more. I can't wait to see how this story develops ‼️
Your novel has potential, though there are only 4 chapters for now, I hope you can upload more soon, I would definitely recommend it to anyone.....
Ok, the story was hooking with a lot of cliffhangers. There's audible description and dialogues. There was balance between the two and the world building was amazing.
Simply beautiful. Love the way you write fam. This is just, really good. I'm looking forward to Kael's growth as the story goes on. Definitely worth reading.
Here is my review regardinh this book Hollow Sun. World Building: So far the world building ia quite fine with the monstrous hollow monster and the hunters. I also like they are few different types of them. Therefore, I suggest the author to expand more different types or variant for the hollows to make it more interesting and intriguing. I also suggest the writer to little bit expand more of hollow's impact to the human living there and expand on the hunters too. Characters: Kael so far is is quite good protagonist especially with him trying to adapt with his live as a hunter. However, there is little bit of infodump about his backstory which is okay move to flesh him out. Maybe my suggestion for the author to describe more of his expression and hand gesture whenever he reminded or thought about his past to make the writing more engaging. As for other characters, they all alright in the story. Plot: So far the direction of this story and I do like the author giving the sense of danger for the hollow. The action of this book is captivating as for now. Overall, this is book has a good potential with the lore. I will recommend for those who like action too as it also offered action packed scenes in the beginning. Thank you!!
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Hollow Sun is an exciting blend of action, adventure, and mystery with a well-developed system mechanic. The world-building is immersive, creating a dark and intriguing setting filled with danger and secrets. Kael Solis is a compelling protagonist, and his struggles make his growth feel natural and satisfying. The pacing keeps the tension high, and the conspiracy surrounding the Hollow Sun adds an extra layer of depth to the story. Definitely a must-read for fans of system-based fantasy Looking forward to more chapters