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His Only Love

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นักเขียน: Lindsy_newton

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Catina meets a mysterious guy after she was dared by her best friend to approach him. Cause of her past she vowed never to trust anyone. The mysterious guy had so many secrets, Catina starts to fall in love with him. She still denied that she felt nothing for him until it reached a point, she couldn't continue to lie to herself. So many secrets unfold after she knows him more.

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    Michelle_Sosa

    I am excited for the rest. The story only has two chapters for now but I can already see that it's turning into something. I am honestly eager to see how the story unfolds. It's interesting to know Zach seems to be developing feelings and I can't wait to see what he does next. Great job author, you definitely have my attention.

    3yr
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    mrant12

    Very very well written. The vocabulary and grammar are spot on. The plot is epic but most of all, the character growth is really well done! Excellent novel!

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Am_chase

    I love this story and the way the author describes the emotions of the characters. It's an interesting itself and I wonder what will happen between Shawn and Cat. I recommend anyone seeing this review to add the story to library and let's all read it. You will love it too

    3yr
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    d_nmalory

    Great story here and from the very start the potential is evident. If it's not a bother I would like a sweet best friend like Zack and I thank the author for bringing him to us 🤗🤗

    3yr
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    cookiez_tiffe

    The opening itself showed many foreshadowing events and questions of who our MC really is. The interaction between characters are well portrayed like a real life conversation. A feat not easy to achieve. A very good job to the Author. Cheers.

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    KayLillyt_1

    Good from the start, better the further you read. I cannot wait for more. A well told, wonderfully written story about love, romance and where it leads. Well done.

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Kiiara
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    This is a great story and I can see potential in it. The writing is also nice. It's just there's too much 'telling' rather than 'showing'. Telling through the dialogues. I would suggest for you to describe more on the setting and the atmosphere. A story esp in the form of novel, it needs to evoke an image in our head through just writings. Therefore, it is important for u to help us readers understand the whole situation by showing more, narrate the situation, is it crowded? where r they right now? What's going on? What r they drinking? Even the character's gesture sometimes can already imply sth rather than using dialogues to achieve this goal. Anyway, I hope I explain it well hehehe...never been good at explaining this kind of thing. Overall, the story definitely has potential. So, keep it up, Author! Good luck! <3

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    3yr
    ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
    BlindBandit

    An excellent start i must say. Your story grips the reader from the very start. The description are also good especially the way you described the feelings and emotions. Good job I gave it 5/5

    3yr
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