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As Leo opened his eyes, he found himself in the body that is not his.
Colt Edgeworth is a man with little to no information in the story Sword of Heaven.
The character Colt Edgeworth died in the hands of his fiancé after experiencing some stabby-stabby action. And that is who Leo had become.
‘I am in a world that has magic, different technology, customs, races, and Gods actually do shit, and I have a woman who loves me but also wants to turn me into swiss cheese...’
He looked at the mirror, contemplated his fate, and came to a single conclusion...
‘So be it, I’ll try living.’
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This destroyed all my expectations in a very very good way I've been hooked since the first chapter and now that I've caught up to the latest chapter IM PISSED it's going to be hell finding something else til it gets updated again. All the characters have wonderful chemistry and the flow of the story is very smooth, there's even comedy and it's actually funny And there's ****ed up **** too so don't go into this expecting soft core
Why is it 5 Star? Yandere Thats why Good work author please keep it up Cuz yandere novels are rare like ultra super rare even goku can't beat it
Your mc is a pussy literally everything else in your story is amazing but your mc's personality has singlehandly ruined this story for me I hate beta mc's .
I had to stop at one point because the author thinks a psychotic yandere makes a great wife. Mental un-wellness isn't sexy. That is really my only problem with what i read of the story. I'm not bashing this story, everything else is fine. Just can't stand an author who treats a crazy as a sexy, beautiful and kind woman. If she stabs you in your sleep how she looks or acts normally don't matter.
This book is in starting stages but i can absolutely tell that it is going to be great if he continues at the same manner. I hope you won't drop this.
The story is good but it still has little problems. The main thing for me is the MC and how weak he is. I like intelligent MCs but having a weak one for over 60 chapters is annoying for me. I mean what happened in the last chapter was the thing I talked about the whole time. A moment will come when neither he or his pshyco girl will be able to do anything especially with him not awakening aura. Now that he lost his arm against an assassin, he needs to stop making around and awaken it. Now, the author will give him some bull**** plot armor and even some of the cats will die to protect him. None of this would happen if he just awakened his aura. I hate when the MC is weak like **** and if this continues plot armor will have to be used to save him each time. Other characters are good and even a little cliche but still good. The story development is still good and doesn't have a problem. In fact, it has one problem and that the author doesn't give us much about the world. Finally the updates are good. The reason I gave one star for character is because of the MC.
Even though it starts out as a rip off setting of trash of the count family, it eventually becomes it's own thing. However it gets way too emotional too fast, before we can really know the characters, however it doesn't stop it from being an enjoyable read.
So overall I think the author is really good at writing out pretty well rounded characters that have a bit of life to them. The only complaint I have that the author has quite a few grammatical errors here and their that don’t really ruin the pleasure of reading. Overall it’s pretty well written and the author knows how to hit in the feels.
It's good. Give it a try. . . . . I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it.
The only problem I have with this is the quality of the writing. Everything else is amazing. A mistakes in writing but nothing nearly bad enough to make me drop it. Cough cough* novels that force you to read through 20 chapters of dog**** grammar.
Nice character development. I don’t really know the plot but so far it seems quite nice. Filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler
This story is still at its early stages but to this is something you should expect...well, at least I expect you to expect... 1. Character Growth of the MC, where he will slowly grow accustomed to the world and power growth. 2. Good characters who I think is alive, well I may be wrong because I may be bias. 3. Feels and emotional roller coaster I supposed? 4. Romance and Fluff
I will definitely give 5/5 for authors hardwork and to encourage him. That was an very interesting story. Usually I find comics in which fl gets into the book and here it is ml who gets into the story which was a bit unique and interesting. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my Interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. Good luck author
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As of where I have read this is a really great novel...a hidden gem as a matter of fact. The characters are extremely fleshed out and the world building is also good.
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the story with good plot and development story. the MC dont know full of the storyline of the world he live now, for me that points plus. Worth for reading
This book needs more justice. Nice storyline and MC development through vol 1 are brilliant. The author wrote very well. Dialogues are nice and the characters are great. The main Heroine is pretty good for me. Even though I usually read Harem novel only. Synopsis hooked me so I decided to read. I found GOLD. Romance between characters is literally good for me. Someone like me who love early romance. I recommend who love to read Romance novels
I believe so far that this is a great read. There are some grammar mistakes but they aren’t noticeable unless you are looking for them. Recommended.
So overall this novel is one of my favorites, not only because the author has a great grasp on how to build characters and make them interesting but he can also get you invested learning more. Honestly I just really like this story it’s a gem can’t wait to see where it goes. Plus one of the only novels that care about editing.