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Alex, a 20-year-old guy was a born loser.
In a world filled with superheroes, he had to live a horrible life. But this all changed when he was approached for an opportunity, something too good to deny.
A simple and easy scouting mission. After it was done, they would give him a huge reward. But the mission wasn't what Alex expected, it was a blur and the next thing he knew, there was a voice in his head, [Does player Alex want to continue?]
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To be honest when I first started the book I wasn’t expecting much, but when you read deeper into the novel it becomes so much more intresting and while it may hint of other novels such as “Only I level up solo”, it puts a twist on those things making it have a overall charm to it. Overall it is a outstanding book and I cant wait for more chapters!
Hey! author here, so I have to be shameless and give myself a free 5 star review, right? I hope you guys like this novel, it's my first time trying out such a genre so some things might be off, I can only know when you guys tell me so comments are important if you see any flaws. Also, this is for the WPC so please, if you can spare a few power stones for me, that would be amazing. I hope you all have a wonderful day!
For first-time readers (and with higher Qi according to other reviews) this can be a very good novel. But readers with average Qi who are already well accustomed to this kind of portals + gamer system, this is an average novel, maybe even a little below that. I'm not a professional critic so don't expect a complex analysis from a Google translator user like me. I just found the novel in general average and the writing a little below average. It was not pleasant to read like many others we have out there. I want to make it clear that average is not a bad thing and I intend to continue reading this novel, that was just my honest review. Sorry for any erros, i used google translator.
*PLEASE READ THIS REVIEW ALL THE WAY THROUGH BEFORE DOING ANYTHING* I absolutely love the idea of this book and it should have been an enthralling story. However, as I read into the book it became more and more apparent that the plot of the story was being made up on the fly and that there was only thought as to that exact moment in the book. The main character was made fairly okay in the beginning but very soon he became like the traditional cardboard cutout of an isekai protagonist bearing no unique qualities and his voice and actions we as though they came right from the authors head making the Main Character fell less like a person and more like a puppet. and the "People" around him were even worse, not only were they used to info dump every few chapters but they orbited around the main character draining the chance that they could have had to have a well fleshed out personality. The plot feels forced and like a match made in heaven, making me feel a little weird because although I am not opposed to it, it makes it harder for me to really place myself in the character position and it breaks the immersion I would normally feel from a book. Now with all my nitpicking out of the way I actually really liked this book. The idea and concept behind the book were phenomenal I was so happy to see someone finally make a book within this category of multi-dimensions, and I must say good sir that this author did a wonderful job with his world-building and how he structured the way everything is supposed to work. I think that this author is not bad at writing but just needs some experience with the wording because info-dumping is okay in any book the only thing is that you need to word it so that it is easier on the reader. The characters need a little more fleshing out and they need to be a little touched up but that can be fixed with time and a little bit of hard work. Overall, I liked this book and to the author. This is a bit of constructive criticism and I hope you take it with a grain of salt as I really liked the concept of your book and I would love it even more if it can reach new heights with this review. I HOPE THAT YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY.
Please support the work of my favorite voice actor, you guys. He's a really great writer plus he's creative and a handsome minor. It was generally well-written there are a few minor mistakes but overall it's good.
To be fair, you have to have a very high IQ to understand Hero System! Transported into Another world. The humor is extremely subtle, and without a solid grasp of isekai most of the jokes will go over a typical viewer's head. There's also Alex's heroic outlook, which is deftly woven into his characterisation - his personal philosophy draws heavily from Ari Kohen's literature, for instance. The fans understand this stuff; they have the intellectual capacity to truly appreciate the depths of these jokes, to realize that they're not just funny- they say something deep about LIFE. As a consequence people who dislike Hero System truly ARE idiots- of course they wouldn't appreciate, for instance, the humour in Alex's pervertedness which itself is an indepth outlook on the psychology of the struggle of males on females in modern society. I'm smirking right now just imagining one of those addlepated simpletons scratching their heads in confusion as Rip Corez's genius unfolds itself on their computer screens. What fools... how I pity them. 😂 And yes by the way, I DO have a Hero System Tattoo. And no, you cannot see it. It's for the ladies' eyes only- And even they have to demonstrate that they're within 5 IQ points of my own (preferably lower) beforehand.
Mostly for XP, but while I am here: 1.I like the main character 2.I like the side characters 3.The grammar isn't too bad (some errors, but not nearly as bad as I have seen around this website) 4.The story is pretty good so far (I am only about 40 chapters in though). Overall, I would say it is worth a shot if you don't hate system stories (or isekai)
Love the amazing novel and waiting for you chapters abd read them straight away. Rip is an amazing author and should keep it up. 😍👍, has the two amazing genres of both hero and system.
dumb mc ✓ check annoying mc ✓ check simp mc ✓ check mc is just retard doesn't even learn from his past mistakes , calls his system annoying , he has foolish pipe dream of become hero and make world in which every hero is good .drools over every girl . I think author delete bad reviews for maintaining rating. this story is utter garbage, waste of brain cell im sure if u hate dumb mc this story is seriously not for u .
The story had potential, the writing quality was good and the MC was likable enough, but it progresses to fast. After a single day he gets into a meeting with the highest ranking people and they personally give him information he doesn’t really need to know at the moment and exposit their inner thoughts every chance they get merely because he is “trustworthy” and “good looking”. If he was alowed to develop and grow a little more without the plot rainning on us like artillery shells in WWII, it would be much more bearable read.
horrible english. not worth the read as you spend more time trying to figure out what the author is trying to say as opposed to enjoying the story or characters.
I've read the first chapter and I am getting some serious solo leveling vibes, I mean he is about to die and then like KABLAMO wanna be a fucking player.
I really feel good about it.l haven't read it completely, but I'm gonna love it even more than what I currently do. Keep going! We will support you!✨
I don't really know how to say this but this book feels nice to me. It feels amazing! I mean like...WOW even if they wrote something wrong it would still be understandable. I just like this book... That's all
Well, I like what I've seen from the book, I dislike the fact that he is a very naive and soft guy, but thank God he changes, not a really cold MC, but knowing that he has to do what he has to do to get the job done. I also like how he's not really OP from the beginning, how he grinds levels to get stronger and I also hope that he and Hana(aka The Ice Queen 👸,) become a couple. 😁😁😁😁 Anyways, so far so good. Great book, with loads of potential
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This story is written by a beautiful man that is very dear to me. Unlike a certain person who writes a DPS story... You know who you are. But rip I love you homie!!!
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Another hiatus? Bro i like the novel and all with potential it had but please keep updating. Meanwhile i do Understand things happen in life which takes importance and all but You have a good story that could be Great with more tweaks and the lack of updates kind Of suck
So I am here trying to give myself a review after reading up to the latest chapter. Let's start first with the writing quality, I'm very well aware of how the story's transition turned out pretty decent. The way the author writes the story is pretty clean and concise, enough for the readers to immediately hook up and immersed in the story without any hurdles. I think this is the greatest benefit you get away with every game system novel. With this kind of strength in your hands, you can reveal an adequate amount of show-not-tell and vice versa. The Updates have been pretty consistent, as I can see with the publishing dates of the chapter, that's even more than one. That's more than what I can ask for. Please keep it up. The story development: I'd say that I love the premise especially the "Government". Whether we like it or not, it's always some shady business over there. It's actually decent and not a far-fetched idea. This kind of administration will always F up some characters and this moves me to the next question. With the character design, we can see the glimpse of Alex, despite his beliefs of the heroes, found himself in a predicament and only to be shattered by the dark side of it. But his strong sense of justice had what kept him from moving forward. I pray that he'll because the superhero where today's youth had lost hope on believing one. With the world background, this is just the beginning and its kind of understandable that world-building is tedious and takes time to form. We just witnessed how Alex is transported to another world after the verge of death. Right now, I'm just seeing the bud that had just germinated. I'm very optimistic that it'll grow as abundant as the flora in the garden of Eden. Keep it up! I hope for the very best in this WPC!
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